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UPDATE (Patreon)

Published:
2022-06-04 01:31:39
Imported:
2023-06

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I gotta go to work, enjoy guys!

https://dashingdon.com/play/fatedflame52/kingdoms-and-empires-alpha/mygame/

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Anonymous

Cheers, best of luck to you. "Just by virtue of his loyalty alone, he was serving as a safeguard against any who would seek to destabilize the kingdom and pit the siblings against one another." - I think this sentence should be future tense " Mary didn't like it when Aurelian looked more like Remiel than Fiona. She preferred the warm and bright look he shared with his older sister when he was happy." This part feels a bit strange considering my character act like Remiel. I like how Sir Beliel actually reacts to our skill set. All in all great job.

KingdomsAndEmpires
>>85167057

Thank you for your suggestions, I was literally writing just as I was getting ready to leave for work lmaoooo

RightInTheGuts

Sorry if this seems pushy—I’m just really eager—is the next update going to be the full chapter? I’m really excited to see what happens next—like how mc’s mother will act when she meets up with MC, and if Aurelian’s preparations will be altered since he was expecting his father, and not his mother, to make the move to join the fight against the rebels.