Pages December 2023. 1/2 (Patreon)

Here comes the first bunch of pages of this month! 5 new pages! 

This month we'll make a pause in our current story of Darlene and Stacy to rescue an old one from Kinky Slave. (It's long to explain why I discarded these pages on its day but if you are interested you can read the full story bellow *.)

Well, let's say it's Christmas and it's appropiate for this season! So enjoy it. The second bunch of 5 pages with the end of this short story will arrive next week.

I've also finished and posted the final pdf of FETISH illustrations. Again it's a good season to close old proyects. 

The extra illustrations (for the $7 supporters) will arrive during the last week of the month.

Regards,

Coax

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* Long story:

"Kinky Slave" had a lengthy and intricate inception. Well before Coax and Coaxdreams, while I crafted short stories for French Kiss magazine, this project marked my inaugural attempt at a graphic novel. For a few intense weeks in the summer, I immersed myself in drawing pages. It was all quite impulsive—I refrained from scripting until the illustrations were complete. Additionally, I jumped between chapters based on my inclination to work on either. I managed around 80 pages out of an anticipated total of 120. However, my enthusiasm dwindled, and the project languished unfinished and forgotten in a drawer.

It's important to note that, during that time, I hadn't ventured into online product sales. While I was publishing in a magazine, I harbored doubts about the editor's interest in this rather unconventional and highly fetish project.

Fast forward several years; I now self-publish digitally, free from editorial constraints. It's time to revisit old ideas and projects. Despite my fondness for my old pages of "Kinky Slave" several issues need resolution:

It remains unfinished. What's worse, without a written script there are parts whose endings I can't recall.

I've evolved as an author, leading to aspects I no longer appreciate.

Originally on paper and ink, I now work exclusively in digital format. Any new pages might distinctly reflect this transition.

Ultimately, I made several drastic decisions. I minimized drawing as much as possible and discarded disliked material. Rather than completing the project, I opted to salvage what I could. I retained the essential components, fine-tuned details, added a page (the splash page with the car at night), and restructured the entire material. Omitted were a peculiar dream, a nocturnal stroll, a spanking session, and a surprise visit. While I once favored the last scene, it now seems to detract from the main plot—their relationship.

At one point, I contemplated continuing the story, finding the trio's concept intriguing to develop. However, I ultimately preferred starting afresh with new characters, resulting in "The Collar".

In my comic "Secret Domination League" I briefly featured the characters, making a cameo in a party across a couple of pages.

Now, once again, I revisit the characters to rescue nine discarded pages and drawing an additional one. Let's call it a Christmas gift.

Warm regards,

Coax