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Not sure there's a ton of point posting the inks since they're pretty similar looking to the digital sketch, but eh. If nothing else you can see what I ended up doing with the text. I didn't exactly use any specific suggestion, but took the flavor from a few of them and mixed them together in my own way. I think I got something that fits the tone I want- I hope y'all like it!

I've noticed lately that the inked version of my pictures have been looking a little disappointing compared to the digital sketch, and I think part of the reason comes down to much bolder lines in the digital sketch. A lot of my pens were too fine. I thought I'd experiment and see how thicker lines look in a painting so I busted out the brush pen for the first time in a while. The brush pen causes some feathering, but I don't think that'll be too noticeable in the finished version, and I do think I'm liking the thicker lines so far.

Anyway, we'll see how it works in the finished thing. I'm off to start painting!

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Bloudin Ruo

Oh man Ru, definitely nailed that dialogue! I love the flavor you put on it with combining multiple ideas, the tone fits perfectly! I know I aaaalways say it, ugh look at me doing more praising, but I think this is going to be one of your most beloved and popular pieces. The situation is just so versatile--You have avian and canine, male and female, domination, submission, power-play, a little sprinkle of bondage and whole -lot- of sexiness. Definitely appeals to a large range of audiences! And that bulge, woof! Really does a great job of emphasizing how much that little birdie is taking. I personally really like it when you decide to try something different, so I'm excited to see how you enjoy painting with thicker lines! Whatever happens, enjoy yourself and have fun with it!

ruaidri

Thanks! I did notice after inking that I used forms of the word 'enjoy' twice in a row which is a little annoying, but not the end of the world I think. At the very least I do think it got the attitude just right. But yeah, this was a really fun idea, I think people are gonna like it! I hope so anyway, but if nothing else I'm really enjoying it at least, heh.

Bloudin Ruo

Actually I didn't even see that until you pointed it out! I think they're far enough away from each other and enough differently conjugated that it doesn't clash at all when someone reads it. Don't stress about it too much! Always enjoy the work you do :) If you're no longer doing art that you enjoy, definitely take a step back and re-evaluate what brought you there and try to find a way back to doing what you love.

Chillum

At first I was disappointed that my proposal did not win the vote, but now I'm almost happy that your masterpiece is just brilliant

ruaidri

I'm a bit late on this reply, but thanks man! I'm glad I could make something you like even if it wasn't quite what you wanted at first. :P