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As I've said before, this is all very experimental, so I'm not going to feel too bad about trying new things mid-comic even if it messes with the 'continuous' feel a little bit. 

In this page I changed up a lot of things- shading method, paper, got a new brush to use... lotta changes.

It's got some problems- shading on the clothing is a bit weak in particular- but I'd be curious to know what you think of how this one looks, or any other thoughts you've got!

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Anonymous

Looks to me like Deer is about to get off unless Gale slows down! Not like Gale would mind, he'd just take care of Blue while Deer recovers.

ruaidri

Hey, it's his first time, I don't think anyone expects him to be an endurance powerhouse anyway. ;P

Magitechnician

His bashfulness is *adorable*

Bloudin Ruo (edited)

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2021-07-10 00:03:50 Your depth shading on Mr. Buck in panels #3 & 4 is amazing, and the anatomy of Gale's jaw in #4 specifically is a cut above the rest! The clothing does feel a little flat, but it's definitely a secondary concern when compared with the main event!
2018-06-07 02:55:34 Your depth shading on Mr. Buck in panels #3 & 4 is amazing, and the anatomy of Gale's jaw in #4 specifically is a cut above the rest! The clothing does feel a little flat, but it's definitely a secondary concern when compared with the main event!

Your depth shading on Mr. Buck in panels #3 & 4 is amazing, and the anatomy of Gale's jaw in #4 specifically is a cut above the rest! The clothing does feel a little flat, but it's definitely a secondary concern when compared with the main event!

ruaidri

Hey, thanks man! The clothing definitely is lacking a bit here but I'm glad the rest of it seems to have come together. :3