Chapter Delay (Patreon)

I've been contemplating the direction of book 2 for a few days and although Veskari and the new tube critter are going to be a part of the story, I think i've introduced them wrong. Veskari was supposed to be different, but I've just written him as another generic asshole.  So from chapter three I've been tweaking the story again, so that unfortunately is causing a delay for the new chapter. 

I'm an exploratory writer, I have a plan and a direction, but most of the story is discovered along the way. Unfortunately some of those discoveries are not fleshed out as they're supposed to be and falter when too much pressure is put on them.  

Most of what happens so far is going to be the same, just Veskari's going to be slightly different and they'll be further along in the story.  the first section seems too... bloated, nothings happening and there's just random wandering about.  I have a plan for the first arc, but i hasn't hit the main points i wanted, so this is some reworking of the story. 

Sorry about the delay, but please wait a few days and next week I'll toss up five chapters.  Thanks for your patience and patronage. 

-Alex