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Three Square Meals Ch. 169 (Updated) (Patreon)

Published:
2024-07-01 03:11:05
Imported:
2024-08

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Hi everyone,

As I mentioned in the status update, I'm still working on chapter 169. I've added a big chunk of extra combat scenes, which nearly concludes the battle. I'll try to finish that off for you as soon as possible.

Please let me know if you spot any typos and I'll correct them asap.

Best wishes,

Tefler

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David B

All I see is John making the other Prog bleed, and then the chapter 169 Alyssa is groaning and so is John. When did the Prog counterattack?? It’s not in 168??

Michael56Smith
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Hey there David, ... I hadn't noticed any continuity problems with this latest partial chapter, .... I think that I'll re-read it before the rest of the chapter makes its appearance tomorrow, and I'll watch for what you spotted David, ... -- oh boy, ... more TSM soon to drop, it feels almost like X-mas, .... ;-( ttfn

Michael56Smith

-- a couple of boo-boos for you to fix, in time for the completed chapter #169 EOM drop, ... these oopsies can be found on page 25 of 29, with Jehanna, Ailita and Almari surrounded by Galkiran Thralls: "Ailita started shimmering, her shape becoming instinct, as the two women in body armour activated flight mode on their Paragon suits. The Nymph shapeshifted into a beautiful songbird, it’s white plumage ..." --- instinct s/b indistinct, .... and it's s/b its ---- loving the story, Hope you are feeling better, .... ;-) ttfn