Script - Setsuna, Turning the Tables (Patreon)

I hope this gets noticed in the middle of our story selection for the month. Let me know what you make of this. In two weeks I put up a script for Code Geass Japanophilia, and two weeks after that - pick below!

Setsuna

Page 1: Setsuna is bored at the gates of time - when suddenly, something attempts to strike her from offscreen. She rolls out of the way - and is shocked to see a 'corrupted' Salior squad bearing down on her.

Sailor Pluto stands guard at the Gate of Time.

Narration: I, Sailor Pluto, hold a heavy responsibility. To protect the Gates of Time and Space, from which all eras can be reached.

Move to a closeup of her face as she notices something.

Narration: Trespassers and interlopers will be barred entry. 

Sailor Pluto suddenly rolls to the side, just in time for a burst of fire and lightning to strike where she was standing.

Narration: Whether they come from 'past', 'present', 'future'...

Sailor Pluto lifts her staff, and we see evil sexy versions of Sailors Mars, Mercury and Jupiter. Mars and Jupiter are pointing at her, while Mercury is tapping away at a computer. I will discuss the designs for these evil versions below the script for space purposes, so please refer to that.

Narration: Or even other possible worlds.

Mars: You missed!

Jupiter: So did you!

Mercury: Have no fears, according to my calculations she's already as good as beaten.

Page 2: Setsuna is surrounded on all sides, wrapped up in a Love Me Chain, while the evil Sailor Moon saunters in with a full on ojou sama laugh. This is their protector?

Pluto aims her staff at them threateningly while a love-me-chain loops in around her arm, coming from offscreen somewhere in Pluto's blind spot.

Pluto: Twisted mockery of my friends, you shall not pass this -

Suddenly, Pluto is wrapped up in a love-me-chain  being held by evil sexy Sailor Venus, who is making her hold her staff behind her back in an uncomfortable looking pose.

Pluto: Guh?!

Venus: 'Shall not pass this 'guh'? What's a 'guh' meant to be?

We see black high heels click across the ground. Mercury, Mars, Venus and Jupiter all drop to their knees. This is, of course, the evil sexy Sailor Moon

Moon: Ohohohohoho! How witty, Venus.

We now see her in all her glory. Fanning herself down, and holding the most 'victorious ojou sama' attitude that you can muster in a single panel.

Moon: So this is the protector of this universe's gate to time and space? How pathetic! This universe too shall be mine!

Page 3: The evil sailor moon takes some time to brag, this won't be the first universe she's conquered. She'll enjoy capturing their senshi and breaking them in one by one.

Sailor Pluto is tied up, obviously unable to move.

Pluto: What are you supposed to be? Some sort of evil version of Sailor Moon?

Moon: That's Empress Moon to the likes of you. I will add your universe to my ever growing collection!

Pluto: Our Senshi will stop you!

Moon: Ohohohoho! That's what they all say! In the end they all bow their heads and beg to kiss my feet!

Pluto: You arrogant -

Moon: It'll be fun capturing them and breaking their minds. We're getting quite good at it, aren't we?

Page 4: The others chime in, talking about the sinister things they do to mindbreak their counterparts, while Sailor Pluto is completely unphased.

Each one imagines themselves breaking in their good counterparts. Show each in its own panel.

Mercury: I'll force knowledge of every fetish into my counterpart's brain until she breaks. 

Mars: I'll dance barefoot on my counterpart's bare back, until she submits.

Jupiter: I'll strap her into the most intense massage chair in the multiverse!

Venus: I'll tell her about all the interdimensional gossip she's missing out on, then cut her off when I get to the good stuff!

Moon: And I'll make my counterpart watch as they do all that. That usually finishes her off!

Page 5: This is not the response that Evil Sailor Moon was expecting, she yells at Sailor Pluto.

Pluto (seeming bored): I see. Not just evil but perverts as well.

Moon: Hrmph?! Evil perverts, are we? Is it perverted and evil to want to travel the multiverse using intense pleasure to break the minds of your doubles, bending them to your every whim and will?

Mars: Yes, your majesty.

Mercury: It's not the dictionary definition, but it might as well be.

Moon: Oh, what a relief! I was worried I was losing my touch! Ohohohoho!

Pluto(smug face): Laugh it up while you can, you're still not passing through that gate.

Moon: Who says?!

Page 6: Continues yelling for a bit, but then...

Suddenly, Empress Moon is jumped on by two more copies of herself with the Pluto symbol in their eyes.

Pluto: They say.

Evil Moon reels a bit and tries to back off.

Moon: Huh?! What's this?! Get them!

The other Evil Sailors are similarly outnumbered by two. This panel should be pretty big, I'll let you lay out the action as you like. Empress Moon should be extremely shocked and surprised at this development.

Each of the new Sailors should say some variation of "For Mistress Pluto!" "Stop the intruders!" "Obey Pluto!".

Page 7: 

Moon: Where? Where did they come from?

Suddenly, Sailor Pluto is behind her, puts her hand on Moon's shoulder and whispers in her ear.

Pluto: These are your future selves.

Moon: Huh?!

We see that Pluto is still tied up where she had been before

Pluto (tied up): What's the matter, is it not going well?

Moon: Ch-Cheater!

Moon is suddenly rushed by her doubles and grabbed by the arms

Moon: Ah!

The new Pluto leans close to Empress Moon as if she's going to kiss her, but at the last moment whispers: "Pluto Seduction Make Up."

Page 8: Each of the Evil Sailors are being held in place and forced to watch Sailor Pluto's transformation sequence. Each one is further along in hypnosis than the last, which you can show by making the Pluto symbol appear in their eyes more obviously.

Moon: B-But you're already transformed, what are you - Oooh!

Venus: S-So elegant!

Jupiter: So powerful!

Mars: So pretty!

Mercury: So superior!

Page 9: 

Another Future Sailor Pluto walks over to where the present tied up Pluto is.

Pluto (tied up): This really is cheating, you realise.

Pluto: Her Majesty gives us special permission to deal with her counterparts in this way.

Future Pluto uses her staff to push through the chains, cutting her past self free.

Pluto (future): Once those idiots are brainwashed, take them back in time twice to put them under our spell.

Offscreen: Mistress Pluto! 

Also offscreen: We love you, Mistress Pluto!

Pluto: Can't we do anything about that?

Page 10: 

Future Pluto goes past her into the gate of time, leans on it to open it up.

Future Pluto: Not to worry.

The gate is opened, and we see that there are several different evil Sailors obviously doting on Setsuna in the past.

Future Pluto: We find a good use for them, in time.

Pluto: Yes, I suppose time is a funny thing like that...

Sexy Sailor Scout designs! Make them all appear at least 18 please! They all have tiny crowns atop their heads with the relevant symbol atop as decoration.

Moon - Her normal sailor uniform, except the leotard is black rather than white, and there's a moon crest cut showing off her cleavage. 

Mercury: Black rimmed glasses, light blue thigh high socks. A very short pencil skirt, and a button up shirt that has the top two buttons undone, and just barely shows off her navel. The Mercury symbol should be on the rim of her glasses.

Mars: Bright red skintight leather with heel shoes. The Mars symbol is across her outfit's tummy, cut out to show skin.

Jupiter: Green tube top with the Jupiter symbol on it, and green booty shorts. The Jupiter symbol is on her tube top.

Venus: String bikini made up of looping Love Me Chains. Has the Venus symbol tattooed on her belly.