March Story Breakdown (Patreon)

Please note this doesn't include breakdowns for commissioned requests, just the five stories I'm planning on writing this month. I'm excluding the prose of Mariko's New Team because you've already seen that plan in the form of scripts and comics.

Also, I promised to know when Furinkan Boy's Club was updated. I've just put up the new chapter on my blog. 

Here are the brekadowns. But these aren't written in stone. If there are improvements you can think of to any of these, please let me know.

Danganronpa - The Ultimate Playboy

• Begin with Makoto's standard introduction, as well as that for Hope's Peak.
• Reveal that he's got another talent that others don't know about. He's the Ultimate Playboy.
• If you want some evidence, then right now Sayaka is blowing him under the desk.
• A long time ago, there was an incident at their middle school involving a crane. Makoto helped deal with that - and through the powers of the Ultimate Playboy, noticed that Sayaka had a crush on him.
• This led to them talking and hanging out more, and Makoto becoming aware of his ability to understand and seduce women. He can do this to basically any woman he finds appealing, but holds off because he's content with dating Sayaka.
• The two of them discuss their plans for Hope's Peak, and decide to play it safe. Get to know the rest of their class before letting them know they're dating. After all, an idol dating a boy is a big deal. The only reason Makoto gets away with it is that he's so... unassuming.
• They get to class, and Makoto gets to interact with the various students there. Byakuya scoffs at the "Ultimate Lucky Student" getting to attend the same class as him, as he views 'luck' as something used by the poor to justify their fortunes or lack thereof. An excuse to avoid hard work.
• Mondo's his usual manly self, dismissing Byakuya's arrogant claims, while Ishimaru advises Makoto - and the rest of the class - to live up to their full potential as an Ultimate. Hagakure says something dumb and asinine.
• Makoto's eyes wander over to the girls. He notices right away that Chihiro is a boy, and decides not to out him without a second thought. He notices Sakura's inner beauty right away. Notices that he should stay the fuck away from Toko and maybe figure out a way to get her the mental help she needs while staying the fuck away from her. Sayaka's already talking with Aoi, Kyoko's hanging out at the back of the classroom by herself. Makoto senses daddy issues coming from her, and wonders what her ultimate talent is. As if reading his thoughts, Kyoko mentions that she's the Ultimate Detective, which raises a little interest among the class.
• Up until a late arrival enters. Junko, talking like a valley girl, strides into class. Makoto mentions being unable to look away from her. Not because she's ridiculously hot or anything. Which she is. SHe is definitely at the level where she would have that effect on a boy. But... no, that's not the reason. It's Despair. He can sense the depths of Despair this girl feels and wants to inflict upon the world.
• Junko immediately walks into the conversations the other students are having and, right away, brings them around to a sour note seemingly by accident. But Makoto can sense she's having fun. (this part needs a bit more planning for specifics)
• Hifumi notes Makoto's interest in Junko, and praises his tastes - though personally he prefers Sayaka. Hagakure comments that there's plenty of hot girls in class - except Sakura obviously. Though Makoto honestly still thinks she's hot. Just... in a different way than the rest of the class.
• Ishimaru gets everyone to settle down, as the teacher has arrived - and Makoto sits down, thinking about what he saw from Junko Enoshima and Mukuro Ikusaba. Despair, from both of them. Such levels of Despair that it leaves him sick to his stomach. Such Despair... that he has to do something about. Something drastic. Something he promised himself he'd never do. Which in turn causes him to feel a sort of Despair and anticipation all of its own.
• Cut to Kyoko's point of view after class, as she considers the best way to approach her father - the principal - so she can say what she came here to say. She then bumps into Makoto, who falls to the ground instead of her. She helps him to his feet, and pointedly asks if he did that on purpose.
• Makoto blusters a little and says, yeah he sort of did actually. He'd been wanting to talk to her since she's the Ultimate Detective, as he needs some help with something.
• This peaks Kyoko's interests. Makoto takes her aside and then admits to her that he's dating Sayaka - a fact that Kyoko had already deduced from their body language - and Makoto mentions that he's pretty sure she has a stalker. She's not wanting to do anything about it herslef, but - but as her boyfriend he cannot help but worry.
• Kyoko warns that she won't spy on Sayaka for him, but that isn't what Makoto wants at all. He just wants Kyoko to befriend Sayaka and keep an eye out for anything weird. There's no need to tell him anything - if the Ultimate Detective is keeping an eye on things, he's sure his girlfriend is safe!
• Kyoko shudders a bit, understanding why Sayaka is dating Makoto. She also feels an intense sexual attraction to him just from this brief conversation. She agrees to help out by keeping an eye on Sayaka, maybe even becoming her friend.
• Makoto says that's good. And, actually... if he's honest, it would probably be good for Kyoko as well. She'd seemed quite lonely and quiet at the back of the classroom, silently watching everyone. Kyoko deduces that this is the other reason he approached her instead of Sakura, and comments that his kind heart will get him into trouble.
• Cut back to Makoto watching Kyoko leave, fully appreciating the fine body of that detective. He went for her first because she's the second smartest in the class behind Junko, but she's also a way easier target because he happens to already be her type. All he had to do was approach her with a detective like job that she would be sympathetic towards - and now he'll have freer access to her, so he can work his Playboy magic. She'll be putty in his hands within a week.

Stultus pulchram

· Negi tells some of the girls that he'll be away for a couple of days on urgent business, and asks them to keep an eye on things for him.

· Asuna is taking this responsibility very seriously. Sadly for her, Haruna is not. She's been poking around Negi's things and found an old crusty book of spells

· Nodoka doesn't want to read it, but Yue is kinda curious. Asuna comes around after some cojoling.

· Since Asuna is so worried, she can be the one to read the book. She rolls her eyes, aware that her magical immunity will protect her from any curses on the book, and then she flips to a random page and starts to read.

· She finds one interesting spell right away. Apparently it can transform the caster into the ideal mate for their one true desire.

· Yue and Nodoka both picture Negi at this.

· Haruna asks for more information, excited to hear what this entails

· Asuna reads out the backstory for the spell. Apparently it was created by a frustrated young woman dabbling in magic, who was seeking a boyfriend and finding all the men she liked weren't interested in her. She constructed this enchantment based on a corruption of the latin for the words “pretty” and “stupid”, using them together in a way that they would never be used if someone was actually speaking latin.

· Yue and Nodoka are interested in more of the backstory, but Haruna pushes for more information on the spell and gets Asuna to say its name – Stultus Pulchram!

· Instantly, she becomes a busty bimbo wearing a pink tanktop and extremely snug daisy dukes. The other three girls boggle in shock. Asuna though, she just giggles away brainlessly.

· Haruna readily acknowledges that this would definitely draw the interest of any man, while Yue and Nodoka are too stunned by this to believe what they are seeing. Asuna though, she's super duper horny and wants to have sex with them.

· Haruna enters conversation with Asuna asking her how she feels after casting that spell. Asuna stares back blankly and asks what spell. Haruna says “the spell you just cast”, but Asuna doesn't remember anyhting like that. Growing frustrated, Haruna winds up saying the spell herself and is suddenly a bunny bimbo.

· Yue and Nodoka have a moment of stunned realisation – merely saying the spell is enough to cast it on yourself! Plus, the fact that Asuna was able to use it on herself means it can overcome even her magic negation.

· Before they can run though, the bimbos stop them from leaving the room. They think Yue and Nodoka would make super cute bimbos too. They should totally say the spell and get these amazing scrummy bods!

· Yue steps in front of Nodoka to protect her. The bimbos try the same thing that worked on Haruna, but neither of them are dumb enough to say it, not after seeing that.

· Nodoka goes for the book to flip through it, hoping to find an antidote or counterspell. Then she realises that that section of the book Asuna flipped to was sealed by a magical charm that she must have broken, as she cannot get to the right page.

· Asuna sees that Nodoka is distressed and offers to help find the page. Though she totally cannot remember what spell it was.

· Haruna suggests Stultam poochum, and the two bimbos go back and forth for a little bit before Yue, annoyed, yells that it's stultus pulch- then she stops herself from finishing the spell at the last moment.

· Asuna says she's totally found the page now, and starts to read it out. Then she says that the counterspell is, like, a yummy pot of... ramen!

· Yue blurts out “ramen?” then goes bimbo. She'd deliberately kept quiet there, but the bimbo had tricked her into saying the phrase. This leaves only Nodoka in the room, surrounded by three giggly bimbos.

· Yue hugs onto her, and tells her that it's totally okay. Like this, she can be soooo much more confident about herself and sooo much sexier too! All she has to say is the magic phrase and -

· Without Yue giving her the emotional support to refuse, Nodoka relents and says the spell, instantly transforming. The four girls then totally agree that they need to share this gift with everyone!

Fate skill grinder

· Backstory on Sakura as she arrives at the Emiya house. Who she is, why she is the way she is, etc.

· She had that strange encounter with her big sister earlier. Or, the one that looked like her big sister. It was obviously a fake of some sort, and claimed to be using some form of Second Magic, which could get her into a lot of trouble if the Mage Association found out.

· She knows that Emiya has been practicing tracing magic all wrong. She doesn't want to confide in grandfather, and the other Rin asked her not to say anything to the Rin she knows. For that reason, she's made up her mind. Since Emiya obviously knows about magic anyway, she might as well ask him for help.

· Of course, she'll leave out the bits about her being dirty and unclean due to the worms. It should be enough that he knows the Matou family are a Mage family – and it would help keep him out of trouble if he registered with Rin at some point, since she is the local admin. This is something she should have done a long time ago, for his safety.

· Such thoughts vanish when she sees his smiling face, greeting her at the door. Taiga is running a bit late apparently, but she should be along soon enough.

· While heading to the kitchen, Sakura thinks she senses the presence of someone else – but when she goes to look she sees nobody.

· She asks Emiya if he has another guest. He says no, but is quite obviously lying about it. She calls him out on this, though realises that she's doing so in a way that implies she is good at lying.

· Emiya chuckles and asks why he would be lying about having a guest. If anything, he'd happily introduce Sakura to a friend of his that was paying a visit!

· Sakura suggests playfully that it might be a da~ate, though something dark inside her stirs at that notion. He denies that, he's not the sort of person who would secretly date a girl. Sakura leans in closer to take a look, teasing him a bit. Weirdly, when standing near him like this she sort of feels like it wouldn't be the worst thing in the world to share him with someone else.

· She decides that if he won't tell her, then she'll have to settle for letting his guilt stew until it bubbles over. She'll be here in the kitchen helping him make dinner. All the while, his own telltale heart would hammer away about the lie until he spills the beans. Emiya says that she has a scary side to her as well, huh?

· All of a sudden, she's standing in Emiya's room staring at Rin wearing a weird scantily clad outfit. She's dizzy. Giddy. How did she get here?

· Rin asks how she feels, and Sakura admits that she's... really horny. Rin asks if she's horny for Emiya, and Sakura says she is. Then Rin asks if she's okay with sharing him with others, and Sakura moans that it sounds like the best fuking idea she's ever heard.

· Rin then hugs Sakura and apologises. When she traced her, she caught a glimpse of everything she'd been through, and promises to save the original from that life as well. Sakura is confused, but then feels an overwhelming urge to help Rin do exactly that. Free the original Sakura from her living hell.

· Rin explains that this is what she was feeling when she made the copy of Sakura using tracing magic. Which makes no sense to Sakura as you cannot create a copy of a soul. Rin then goes on to explain that this is definitely not Second Magic. It's probably closer to First or even Third Magic.

· This Rin exists solely to satisfy Emiya's base sexual urges, while this Sakura exists to help Sakura find a happier life. Which she acknowledges would be as a member of Emiya's harem. Right now, the original Sakura is happily making dinner in Emiya's kitchen, which is where she was when Rin traced her ten minutes ago.

· So, Rin says they have two objectives now. The first is to help Emiya's harem grow. The second, to annihilate the Matou family. To that end, she gives Sakura a newly traced Skill Grinder with just what she'll need to do exactly that.

TLR rito the pervert

· Haruna arrives at school , disappointed that she missed Rito en route. She thought she had his schedule down, but he must have left late today.

· No matter. Her goal today is pretty simple anyway. She's going to help him expand his harem. If she cannot ask him directly who to go for, or how to help him out, she'll surprise him by going for the Queen herself. Saki.

· Brief descriptuon here of Saki, her personality, apperaance, social standing, etc.

· In a rare moment, Haruna finds Saki by herself. No sign of her friends. She approaches, and Saki asks her what she wants.

· Haruna brings out an ancient coin, and uses it to hypnotise the girl. She'll use her resources and her talent to assist Rito and his growing harem.

· Saki agrees to this, seeming to be totally under Haruna's spell.

· Only when Haruna has left do Saki's friends emerge, and Saki reveals that shes not under hypnosis after all. Like the rest of the school, she's cauronght on to what Rito is doing – and had been seeking a way to get brought into that! To think Haruna would try something so daring as trying to hypnotise her.

· However, as her friends quickly demonstrate, she actually totally was hypnotised by Haruna – but this is so interesting that they decide to leave it as it is. No real harm was done here.

Naruto – Hinata the Princess

· We join Naruto at the end of a mission. A cult was trying to to perform some ritual or other, and he managed to put a stop to it. While investigating the remains, he happens upon a weird tiara.

· It's clearly magical in some way, but wasn't directly being used by them in their ritual. He suspects that they were hoarding it due to its magical potential, but he's unsure of what it does. He lacks the necessary talent to really look at it.

· However, he knows exactly who can take a good look at it. Hinata Hyuuga.

· Cut to Hinata, who is musing over recent changes in her life. She's now dating Naruto, something that she had always dreamed of since she was little.

· He has returned from his latest mission, and she greets him warmly. Naruto is his usual self, and still a little unsure how to handle this 'dating' thing. Anyway, he tells her a bit about his mission. Then shows her the tiara

· It's the one thing he can't work out, and it's really bothering him. Hinata regards it carefully, even studying its chakra with care. She can tell there's something weird about it, an odd swirling effect surrounding the tiara.

· He agrees to leave it in her care, and then asks her out on a date. Ah, but he really isn't sure what to do on a data – and she's a little unsure as well!

· Hinata thinks about the advice Sakura had given her about going out on a date.

· They wind up getting ramen, with Hinata impressing Naruto with her bottomless stomach. She is a little embarassed at her conduct, believing it was quite unfeminine.

· Naruto assures her that it's fine, but old insecurities are starting to pour back in.

· That night, Hinata is staring at the tiara, while wondering if she's really suitable girlfriend – or even wife – material for Naruto. She imagines herself as his wife. Embarassing him during important meetings. No, no, no! She shakes it off, she's not like that anymore!

· As Hinata continues studying the tiara, this feeling of insecurity continues to rise. She's not figuring it out either, so what good is she to him? It lures her into putting it on, and she looks at herself in a mirror. Seeing a pretty princess rather than a kunoichi.

· Hinata takes the tiara off when she realises what she's doing, and carefully checks her own chakra. There doesn't seem to be anything off about it, but just in case she's going to get some sleep.

· She collapses into bed and finds it a bit too uncomfortable at first. This is strange, she's always found it quite good in the past, but now it's simply not soft enough. After a moment though, of confirming that this is her mattress, it does grow softer and softer, the material its made of more splendid... And as she falls into a deep sleep, the room she is in starts to change, becoming pinker and fluffier, and more princess like.

· Hinata rolls out of bed the next day, and finds that all her clothes have been changed into royal dresses. Even her kunoichi gear! Worse yet, the tiara is back on her head. Had she put it on in her sleep?

· This must be the effect it has, and she tries to hurry off to warn Naruto about it. However... She's having trouble running in heels. Which is strange as she definitely did not put on heels.

· Her entire home seems to have changed accordingly, as if she had always been a Princess. A spoiled, pampered, pretty Princess, who is forced to walk in a gradual and dignified manner.

· What makes matters worse is that she finds her father sitting with Naruto, the obvious future hokage – arranging a marriage between them.

· When he sees her, Naruto is shocked by the transformation. Ah, she's relieved, rushing into his arms and calling him “her Naruto” - which is enough to trip the spell, and making Naruto himself see her as a pretty princess rather than a skilled kunoichi.

· He consents to the marriage, as he likes Hinata and it makes good political sense for him to accept. Hinata is a little shocked by this, but... upon realising she's getting what she'd dreamed of since she was little, finds herself subsumed by her Princess persona.