Script: Sailor Moon Turning the Tables - Makoto (Patreon)

Here is the script for Makoto's comics. Please vote for the script you'd look me to put up in four weeks - and then in two weeks time I will share Minako's with you all. Enjoy!

Page 1:

A thug grabs a pretty maid's purse and rushes off down the street.

Girl: No! Give it back! Thief!

Makoto stands in the thief's way - then tosses him to the dirt

Makoto: Going somewhere, punk?

Thug: Ugh...

Makoto hands the purse back to the maid

(This part is in the same panel)

Maid: Oh, thank you miss! Thank you so much!

Makoto: Eh, no big deal.

(end panel)

The maid has a devious expression on her face while Makoto watches the thug scrambling away.

Maid: I must insist on thanking you...

The maid pulls out a feather duster and runs it along Makoto's back. Makoto suddenly goes rigid.

Maid: Miss Kino.

Page 2: 

The thug gets to their feet.

Thug: Did you get her?

The maid curtseys for him, blank eyed.

Maid: Of course, master. She reacted exactly the way she said you would.

The thug regards Makoto carefully, while she's standing perfectly still.

Thug: Oho, she's even more talented than the rumours said. 

Maid: Yes, master. She will make a most suitable maid.

Page 3: 

The thug takes the feather duster and smirks at it.

Thug: Kukuku, finding this thing was a real stroke of luck. 

We see a shot of what is presumably the thug's home, with a few pretty maids in sexy outfits doing some cleaning,

Thug: Now, any chick that takes my fancy, I can turn 'em into my personal servant!

Maid: And we're all so grateful you chose us, Master!

Thug: I'm sure, I'm sure, hehehe!

Page 4: 

Thug: Now, let's get this Makoto Kino home.

The thug puts his hand on Makoto's shoulder.

Then, he's tossed on his ass yet again.

Maid: Master!

Makoto: Sorry, pal. There's no spark between us... Yet.

Thug: Y-You! How did you - ?

Makoto: Entrancing Jupiter Power, Make up!

Page 5: 

Cue Jupiter's transformation, in the middle column with the thug and the maid on either side.

Both: Ohhh!

The transformation continues, with the Maid's eyes regaining life as she wakes up from the hypnosis and the thug goes under.

Maid: Huh, my head feels strange.

Thug: Can't concentrate, so pretty!

Page 6: 

The transformation concludes, the Maid is awake and the thug is under.

Maid: What- what have I been doing all this time?

Thug: So pretty...

Maid: That creep - he - He!

Thug: Command me, Mistress! I obey!

Page 7: 

Jupiter: Have no fear, citizen! Sailor Jupiter has set you free!

The thug is on his knees, staring up at Jupiter as if in worship.

Thug: Command me. Anything you ask, I am yours to do with as you will.

Jupiter steps on the feather duster, breaking it.

Jupiter: Troublesome thing. I'd better free the other girls as well, while I'm at it.

Maid: Thank you, Sailor Jupiter! Thank you so much!

Jupiter: Ah, shucks, it's no big deal! Now what to do with this guy...?

Page 8: 

A few days later.

The thug rushes headlong at Jupiter.

Thug: Kyaaa!

Jupiter then tosses the thug straight down.

Jupiter: I hope you learned something from this.

Jupiter then looks up, at her impromptu class of girls.

Same panel(Jupiter: I mean, I've shown you this throw enough times by now.

Former maids (all dressed in gis): Kyaaaa! She's so cooool!)

Page 9

Maid 1: Oh, Sailor Jupiter is the most beautiful and talented of them all!

Jupiter: Ah, you girls don't have to -

Maid 2: That height, that poise, that power, balanced against that femininity!

Jupiter: No, really, you don't have to - 

Maid 3: I want her to step on me! Step on my back!

Jupiter: Uh, starting to get a bit creepy here!

Thug: Yes, yes! You girls get it! In fact, do you know who she reminds me of?

Maids and Thug: Se~enpai!

Jupiter is torn between being creeped out and turned on by this.

Jupiter: Ehehehehe?

Page 10

Rei: I'm not seeing the problem. Didn't you want a new sparring partner?

Jupiter: Yeah, but not -

Thugs + Maid (still dressed in gis, but waving around a banner with the Jupiter symbol on it like a Japanese cheerleading squad): Jupiter, Jupiter, you're the Queen! Like your thunder reign supreme!

Jupiter: Can you tone it down?!

Rei: I'm pretty sure they literally can't.