My very first sex comic (Patreon)

I decided it was about time to try my hand at doing a comic. And by that I mean like a multi-part open-layout style comic. I've never done one before, but last night I got thinking about Princess Bubblegum and Marceline getting it on, and how it would come about.

There was no way I was going to be able to fit it all in one image, so I'm gonna put it together in this format instead. 

The link above is to the very first rough sketches of the first three pages. They obviously have a lot of work left to do before I even start inking them, but I wanted to share them with you and see ya'll think. Any suggestions or feedback would be greatly appreciated!

Here's to hoping it turns out as well as I imagine it!