Opinion Required - Gamer Night (Patreon)
Published:
2018-05-20 18:55:07
Imported:
2020-12
Content
So, I was working on Gamer Night and I was having thoughts about the balance of the story. This being a Gamer story, it's quite difficult to make it good to read. It's far too easy to get off course and lose the grip on the plot, therefore I wanted to ask your opinion.
What do you think the story needs most at this point? Action, smut, romance, characters.
Let me know in the comments.