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Alright, here we are with the second chapter of this month's update.

Sadly it's a bit shorter than I would have liked it, but adding more words for the sake of adding more words would have just clogged the story, so I didn't.

However as compensation. next month I will write a short piece about Irisviel's Bad End that will go along with the image I commissioned.

Anyway, enjoy.

Chapter 20 

Comments

SpectralTime

Hahahaha I was joking about Tora-Shinai! Yes!

Kevin Ramos

Nice. Actually has something to make her a capable fighter.

Loves2Spooge

One problem I noticed was near the start you described Saeko's hair as raven. I loved the fight though. It's very refreshing to see Taiga get fleshed out more than any other stories I've read.

Jek

Nice! Great to see that level of competency on Taiga's part. After all, she's really, really good when it just comes down to just raw skill... I'm just glad she was able to match Saeko before she started using the secret techniques of the Busujima style. Her impressing Saeko that much was vital in a lot of ways... but most importantly is getting Saeko's respect like that. She may be Saeko's "toy" now, but at least since there's respect there, and since Saeko acknowledged the genuineness of her character and feelings for Shirou, at least she won't break him like she considered in the previous chapter. Good job.

Derek58

Here lies Fujimura Taiga, scissored into oblivion :D

Shirou Emiya

I just had an Idea, Maybe you could Have Unohana Retsu (BLEACH) as either A school Nurse or The Healer for the Soul Society. You could also have Shizuka Marikawa (HOTD) as the school Nurse.

ichaichasennin

Those are both interesting characters but the "nurse" in this story is going to be Ryouko Mikado from the To Love Ru series.

2Lazy2Name

Have you thought about including any of the beauties from shows like Highschool DxD, Maken-Ki, or Testament of Sister New Devil (and many more)? Sorry if this is asking for too much, there are just so many sexy women out there in the world of anime...

ichaichasennin

@2Lazy2Name: Yes I did, but there's already plenty of characters from other series as it is. If I added more, the Fate aspect would have suffered. Besides, I intend to write a Fate/DxD crossover as soon as I finish with Gamer Night or The Fall.

Johny5

Are Rin and Sakura also older than Shirou in this iteration? Poor Sakura will think she's *really* messed up for having feelings for a kid several years her junior. Shirou is still planning on jumping straight to High school?

2Lazy2Name

May I ask what your opinion is on having Minori Rokujou from Maken-Ki be the principal of one of the schools in Gamer Night or one of your future stories?