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Alright! Chapter 16 it's finally here.

Man, this chapter just didn't want to end. Writing Taiga as more than a comedic relief character is not easy, let me tell you that. 

I think I did a fairly good job with her, but let's hear your opinion in the comments.

By the way, I wish you all a very Happy Christmas, whether you celebrate it or not. See you guys next year.

Comments

SpectralTime

Well, for what it's worth, I think you did a good job. I got very emotionally invested in the character.

Flbiv

Yes!!! Awesome job with the Taiga route! I found her intimidating Yoruichi a surprising but funny-as-heck twist. Mothering tiger indeed! I’m sad that we don’t get to see the combat, and hope you update skills and stats accordingly. All in all, I really enjoyed it and can’t wait for the next arc to begin. Thank you for this gift and have a happy holiday!

TheSinful

The final scene was pretty adorable. High charisma canceling stealth and conceal presence makes sense. Reminds me of a Pathfinder campaign where we decided the character with 20 Charisma was always in the spotlight and even when you thought he was an ass, you still paid attention (and often agreed), while the character with 2 Charisma was basically unnoticeable. Also, those girls are gonna be in BIG (hard) trouble when Shirou reaches the intermediate or expert ranks of lovemaking.

ichaichasennin

I'm glad you approve, and yes, it's basically the same thing. With sufficiently high charisma, people are going to be aware of you no matter what you do.

TheSinful

By the way, most hilarious thing I did with a high charisma character was convincing some thugs that got the drop on me and kidnapped me that I was their boss. Between my roll and my ridiculous bonuses, I got 40 on my bluff check. GM admitted that according to the rule, I could convince literally anyone of anything with that. So they let me go with an apology (after killing the guy who suggested it) and all their money

TheSinful

I stopped seeing at as a dump stat after the bard we kept making fun of (20 Cha and 10 or less in everything else) seduced the evil lich empress into taking him as a consort and killing the rest of us. I also stopped rolling short non-dwarf races after the half-orc barbarian used my halfling rogue as a club, grappling hook, and bribe in the same session.

Jek

Feral Kitteh < Feral Taiga < Starving Taiga. Pretty simple math.

Jek

"He reminds you of her" - *latches onto words like rabid dog*. Soifon? Or a reason to bring in a character of a different fandom? I like where Shirou's insane Charisma is going. Has he reached the point that it would qualify as a Servant Skill (if low ranked)? I look forwards to seeing the reactions of the Servants to a living human who by that point might very well be suited to the Throne of Heroes. If only in his ludicrous, inhuman Charisma. Anyways, I approve of this chapter! A+! I Quick question, though, although it won't be relevant until a good deal later into the story--I noticed some comments mentioning Arturia Lancer, and while she certainly has a more motherly figure, she just doesn't have quite the same... personality and air as Seibah. And if Mordred gets summoned too, the Father/Son(?!?!) conflict there just sort of withers--the Mordred of L!Arturia didn't have the same love/hate relationship as the Mordred of S!Arturia. And Mordred with big boobs just feels... weird. Of course, assuming Mordred shows up is a titanic assumption, but one I've decided to make whenever authors say or hint that non-F/SN Servants will be summoned, a decision fueled by unjustified hope.

Jek

...Patreon really needs to let comments split into paragraphs.