Terranaut: Rough Pages 17 (Patreon)

I want to change the flashback scene before the lab to a domestic setting, with a little less of an angry tone... Id like to show these characters living together and cooperating, with these pages as the heavy hit of flashback sequence. Filing that into the editing notes for later when the whole story is here for me to chip away at.

Happy page 50! It's been a bit of a rocky journey but it's the longest project I've ever worked on so I'm just happy to have gotten here. I finally had to break down and start typing up an actual script document, so I can keep track of and quickly edit conversations.

Has anyone ever been an emotionally immature young adult unhappy with a close relationship so instead of communicating you just start petty fights hoping to spark a change, but it obviously never works and makes things worse? Because personally I'm so glad I'm not 20 and an idiot anymore