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Raven pg 18 (wip) (Patreon)

Published:
2022-03-28 03:11:08
Imported:
2022-04

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I expanded on a panel at the last minute, which caused me to play comic panel tetris for, like, over an hour. Never underestimate the time consumption of panel layout. Do you think it was a good change?

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Anonymous

Good change never bad to add more action

Steve

Nice change up

pringleman42

i like the after, since we can see more of the top panel, but i also like the way the before one "flows" since it gets right into the action, then cuts to beast boy face before the deep thrust in the last panel. dang this is tough. a close one, but I'd go with before

TheOrangeJacket

I think the effort was well worth it. Gives it a nice feeling of motion.

Joel

I think afterwards Beast Boy should give Raven a nice reverse tit fuck where Beast Boy is sitting on Raven's face while he fucks her tits.

Senpapi

I like the change!

schpicy
>>80688970

That's the main reason why I'm asking! I feel the same way, it's so close in my eyes. Thanks for the input dude.

schpicy
>>80690006

I definitely feel the revised version gives a better sense of rapidness too. So there's another pro. Thanks!

schpicy
>>80690021

Argh, but I gotta keep the comic moving, sadly. I think that could be a fun added scene down the line, like, maybe after the comic's finished? I've been toying with the idea of inserting bonus pages for patrons only.