The New Ron: Edits (Patreon)

Published:

2022-09-17 11:21:26

Imported:

2022-11

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Okay, I think that's it. I've added a fair amount of extra content to the story, highlighted for your benefit in RED TEXT to show where edits are.

Feel free to leave comments and criticism as you guys are supporting me and my writing so I want to give you content that befits your contributions.

Which, again, I very much appreciate.

If all goes well, I'll post the edits to the general thread in a day or two, add a change log threadmark, and we'll move on. Expect a new chapter pretty soon regardless.

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The New Ron

The New Ron 1: I yawned and popped my neck as I walked out of the counselor's office. "Gotcha, thanks again for the advice Ms. Ofacheck." "You're quite welcome Ronald, and do think about what was discussed. You're a smart boy, I'd hate to see that go to waste because you didn't qualify for th...