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Gilded Cage progress 11-20-22 (Patreon)

Published:
2022-11-20 20:23:56
Imported:
2023-04

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Managed to get 2066 words today, 3000 words last night. Just more about Leon and Olas, now they heading off to a magical library.

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Cryodrake

CH 10 Word of warning, some of these near the end is out of order. Cryodrake, [11/25/2022 1:47 PM] All because you’re stupid decisions. (Of your) Cryodrake, [11/25/2022 1:47 PM] all screaming for you come. You ran. (Reword this) Cryodrake, [11/25/2022 1:47 PM] all, collar chained up, held (collar, chained up) Cryodrake, [11/25/2022 1:47 PM] Come by they darling fire, listen to my father, eat from my dinner table. (Reword this) Cryodrake, [11/25/2022 1:47 PM] hot do you know (how) Cryodrake, [11/25/2022 1:47 PM] olas know (Olas) Cryodrake, [11/25/2022 1:47 PM] Insert Krantor wanting lionin deal Cryodrake, [11/25/2022 1:47 PM] and chorped about (chorped?) Cryodrake, [11/25/2022 1:47 PM] and how just how (remove first how) Cryodrake, [11/25/2022 1:47 PM] maybe he was there, (this feels random) Cryodrake, [11/25/2022 1:47 PM] No response from the gryhon (gryphon) Cryodrake, [11/25/2022 1:47 PM] had ended up getting his face getting utterly (used getting twice) Cryodrake, [11/25/2022 1:47 PM] the ten’s exit, (tents) Cryodrake, [11/25/2022 1:47 PM]  his tail thrshed (thrashed) Cryodrake, [11/25/2022 1:47 PM] Dd they hurt you? (Did) Cryodrake, [11/25/2022 1:47 PM]  havn’t hurt (didn't) Cryodrake, [11/25/2022 1:47 PM] Chirped the rust colored Lord. (rust-colored) Cryodrake, [11/25/2022 1:48 PM] The gyph sighed (gryph) Cryodrake, [11/25/2022 1:57 PM] Olas was upon him in , pulling (remove space after in) Cryodrake, [11/25/2022 1:57 PM] pulling him up off the ground and pulling the man into his chest with a vice like grip. (pulling him off the ground and into his chest with a vice like grip) Cryodrake, [11/25/2022 1:58 PM] Oh if they’ve hurt you, (comma after Oh) Cryodrake, [11/25/2022 1:59 PM] trying to hide the way his insides flipped at such a display of concern (his insides flipped?) Cryodrake, [11/25/2022 1:59 PM] there…Murdering (lower case m, i think) Cryodrake, [11/25/2022 2:00 PM] “Course I’m careful. Can’t expect a minotaur assassin to come knocking.” (maybe reword this, could sound better) Cryodrake, [11/25/2022 2:00 PM] head perked up, ears tall. (semi-colon) Cryodrake, [11/25/2022 2:01 PM] “Oh Leo that sort (comma after Oh) Cryodrake, [11/25/2022 2:01 PM] theman’s chin (the man's) Cryodrake, [11/25/2022 2:02 PM] He blushedat the (blushed at) Cryodrake, [11/25/2022 2:02 PM] deserves a reward don’t you?” (reward, don't) Cryodrake, [11/25/2022 2:03 PM] “You don’t need to-“He (space after -)