I need YOUR help.. please ? (Patreon)

This is my newest audio, a simple sleep aid. I had someone offer to help me by doing a sort of noise reduction and getting rid of some background sounds.  I want your opinion on what you prefer, whats more relaxing to you.. etc

This is the UNEDITED version!! This is usually how i do my audios.

My next post is going to have the edited version.

PROS: sounds more crisp to me, more natural. This one more tingly to me
CONS: static, easier to hear bugs in the background with volume up