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Princess Scarlett's main story quest requires rework. Right now, Scarlett's personality revolves around her being the "girl who hates sex" but somehow works at a brothel. And I think I have a done a poor job at explaining why she'd rather live life as a whore than a princess. Let me show you what I have came up with, feel free to leave any suggestions.

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Princess Scarlett needs friendship. Positive attention.

Scarlett's story starts off the same way, a bratty girl that the residents of Avia do not like. Scarlett is forced to make public appearances because her father, the King of Avia, wants to make sure she will be respected in the future. His job is to avoid any conflict between royalty and the citizens. 

The quest starts off the same with Queen getting an invitation to a castle by Naknu. Naknu says Queen won a nobel peace award and must meet the King in his castle. Queen accidentally ends up going to the Avia castle instead of Nigel's castle, ruining Naknu's entire plan.

At Avia, Queen makes her way into the castle only to find out that King of Avia has no idea what she's talking about. Scarlett is introduced as the loud obnoxious girl who keeps interrupting Queen's conversation with the King. 

The King has setup a parade today as a fun event for the citizens. The King tells Scarlett to ride around in a litter so that she gets respect for hosting this fun event.

After leaving the castle, Queen is upset that she was lied to by Naknu. Instead of doing a walk of shame home, the girls cheer up Queen by saying they should stick around for the parade. And maybe they can make some money too!

The parade starts. Scarlett is being taken around by her guards and is getting attention from the peasants. Although the peasants don't like Scarlett, she has something very important for them to stare at... her massive chest. Every time Scarlett is in the limelight, the peasants will do anything to get a glimpse of those perfectly round breasts. 

Queen is in the crowd as Scarlett passes by and she overhears some peasants talking about Scarlett's breasts. How they "would do anything to get a feel of breasts that big!" Queen asks the peasants if they think her breasts are as big as Scarlett's. They say that they're pretty damn big too! Queen asks them if they'd like to touch them for a few gold coins. The peasants begin to grope Queen during the parade.

As Scarlett passes by, she notices the crowd not looking at her. She has the guards stop so that she can see what is happening. There is a circle around Queen, boys reaching in towards Queen's breasts. What a bunch of filthy peasants fooling around in public during Scarlett's parade! How disrespectful. Scarlett thinks to herself, "that stupid peasant girl is getting so much attention from her breasts!" 

Scarlett lowers her top down insignificantly, showing barely more skin than she normally does. The peasants shift their focus onto Scarlett for the hope of her showing some more skin. Scarlett lifts her arms up and pushes her chest forward. Scarlett's breasts look bigger and better than before. The peasants have never seen Scarlett look this seductive before. The crowd cheers for Scarlett, in which the guards mistake for rioting. The parade is no longer safe for Scarlett.

After coming home early, the King tells Scarlett to stay inside. The pose Scarlett struck during the parade has given her new confidence. She loved the positive attention and wants more. On impulse, she decides to sneak out later that night.

Meanwhile, Queen and the girls are left with a bunch of horny peasants in the slums. After finishing them up, they hear some commotion outside of the slums. They see Princess Scarlett and a peasant talking in a back alley. The peasant is on his knees looking up at her. Scarlett is getting satisfaction from tormenting the peasant. Telling him how she is so pretty and how he could never get a girl like her. She lets the peasant play with himself as she makes fun of him. Since Scarlett keeps talking about her breasts to him, as he's about to finish, he tries to get up and give her a hug as he finishes. Scarlett gets scared and flinches as she thinks he's going to attack her. Scarlett's finger accidentally touches the peasants shoulder on his way up. Barely being touched by the princess is enough stimulation to cause the peasant to blow his load all over the ground. Scarlett is disgusted and runs away, but runs into the girls instead.

The girls tell her that they saw everything Scarlett did. Scarlett remembers Queen from the parade and doesn't like her. Queen explains that they're whores so this is their job. Scarlett is disgusted and asks them why they do such ugly things. Suki says that Scarlett is no different than them because she just finished that peasant off. Scarlett refuses to accept what she just did.

~~~~~~ I need some time to think about why Scarlett would change her mind or decide to help out Queen. But just know that Scarlett ends up helping Queen make money in the slums. Queen's plan is for Scarlett to bring all the peasants to Queen using her good looks and then have the peasants have sex with Queen instead of Scarlett. ~~~~~~

Overnight, Naknu has told Nigel that his plan failed and Nigel casts his spell on Avia. The girls come back to the slums the next day to make money. Scarlett sneaks out to help Queen. Scarlett seductively stands on a wooden stage to help draw attention to her breasts. Today, the peasants have turned into mindless sex zombies because of Nigel's spell. Scarlett arouses the peasants from afar, and the girls finish off the peasants below.

Soon after, the King of Avia comes to the slums and he has also been affected by Nigel's spell. The King asks Scarlett who her friends are and what they're doing. Scarlett is scared and can't come up with a reason. The King interrupts this by pulling Queen towards him. Queen notices the purple aura and tells Scarlett that her dad is in trouble and she can help him. Queen, Suki and Esxea are surrounded by Avia guards and peasants. Too many men for them to satisfy, in which the peasants start to walk towards Scarlett.

Queen yells at Scarlett, telling her that they're just stupid boys who want to blow their load. Scarlett is pinned against a wall. The peasants get closer and closer to Scarlett. As a peasant is about to grab her, she grabs the peasants weiner and he blows his load immediately. Scarlett feels powerful. A simple grab made him explode that quickly. Scarlett pushes the peasants back and starts to dominate them by stepping on them and whipping them until they blow.

~~ Boss battle. Queen, Suki, Esxea vs The King of Avia ~~

After they're done. Scarlett uses her most powerful move to finish off the rest of the peasants... she flashes her breasts. The peasants explode in unison. Everyone wakes up from the spell cast on them.

~~~~~~ For a conclusion, I need the peasants to respect Scarlett. Maybe they realize she saved them. I also need the King to know that Scarlett saved them without having sex. Scarlett ends up being the most loved girl there and thanks to Queen, she gains confidence in herself. ~~~~~~

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At the end of this quest, you don't unlock Scarlett. I think her recruitment needs to be pushed to another quest. Maybe after becoming loved by the peasants in Avia, she gets bored of the attention and wants to tackle on a new challenge? Maybe the peasants like Scarlett a little tooooo much... and won't leave her alone. In which, moving would be a better idea for her than staying in Avia. I don't know yet, but I wanted to show you guys what I had in mind for her main story quest!

Hope you enjoyed reading this. If you have any suggestions leave them below!

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Anonymous

I think that sounds interesting, I say any new content would be fun to explore. I suppose seeing a greater distance for her to go from prudish entitled princess to reluctant prostitute wouldnt hurt anything and new art would be cool to see. I think a longer stretch of time before shes recruiteable sounds like a good idea, players having to put in more work to earn her. I do feel a little bummed about the final game missing out on great art and previous story lines, but maybe im just a rarer type to feel that way. I believe once before you said you were open to the idea of an unlockable concept art gallery with art that ended up going unused threwout developement so that we dont miss out on anything, i hope thats still a possibility.

Anonymous

Dont take anything i say a criticism, playing previous versions ill allways have previous version content thats not an issue. Ive definately seen this game transform over time into the best adult game ive ever played! Any changes you make has my full support. Trying to assist with final version ideas. Maybe similar to the broken princess mod her original quest appearing one day as a mod might be another fun alternative for players down the road to try, as a thought. You mentioned on discord you wont change her side quests, i do wonder if maybe some of them might feel a little more out of place after her main quest change, such as her attitude at the frat party, i did love the milk connection from her main quest to her human cow quest, the mooing cow quest is by far my favorite of the bunch. Off the top of my head i do think a dialogue change that may need to be changed in one of them is in her prince quest, i think someone mentiones that shes stolen and fucked those guys previous years? I could be mis remembering it ill, play it again rn to be sure, but it did leave me as helping make sense on why a princess would turn to whoring is if she was already a little bit of a slut. Lets see some ideas that may help you think of reasons why she would help queen, maybe either another situation comes up where she needs to save the day, like the mud monster first appears or stalato's race could have more presance like they become infected with purple horney power. Or as you mentioned she needs friendship and positive attention so maybe she has a falling out with the king and has nowhere else to go but queens. Or something to help explain why she might go from not willing to willing to have sex is she simply tries it and kinda likes it and wants to explore that life a little more since she was sheltered from it but she still kinda holds on to her royalty values threwout the rest of the game a little bit. Idk what do u think of all that dp?