Maid New: Redux (Patreon)
Published:
2023-09-21 21:06:47
Edited:
2023-10-20 09:31:33
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Here it is! The updated, corrected, and expanded version of Maid New.
A few things to help navigate:
- Grammatical errors, typos, name mix-ups, etc. have all been corrected.
- Formatting throughout has been redone (Cleaner sentences, paragraphs, etc.)
- Chapter 1 is now combined with the previous Chapter 2.
- Chapter 5 is a completely new scene.
- All chapters contain added mental dialogue for added effect.
- Several scenes are expanded. To name a few: Amanda's first encounter with Bill, Hannah's party, Amanda's meeting with her new landlord... There are others mixed in as well. Every chapter has a little something new.
- The "ONE YEAR LATER" from the previous version's Chapter 9 has been moved to the Epilogue, which also has added details to better connect with Trading Spaces.
I hope you all like this version (formatted as an e-book as well!). As I mentioned in my previous post, I'm putting this new version on SmashWords but giving it to all Patreon subscribers.
Thanks for reading!
-Yazzers