{WIP} Karamatsu Dakimakura (Patreon)

Karamatsu Daki I'm working on, and I'm just about to ready to line! I'm going to try to finish this in Clip Studio, which the settings are fixed 99% to my liking finally.

My friend (who wanted this in the first place) thinks I should add pupils. I think I like it without and over the top, but I'm not sure. What do you think??