Refined sketch update (Patreon)

Some bit of news, commissioner approved the sketch with all the fixes and background characters added, now it can be made further. Also it's the first time for me scanning my A3 works on clear outlines stage instead of just making pictures of them. Who knows, it can come in handy, I can try put color from final versions on them and see how my works look in a more flat can cartoony state.