(Bloopers) Partners in Crime: Scrapped Version! (Alternate Ending) (Behind the Scenes) (Version 2) (Patreon)

Hi everyone. I recently posted Partners in Crime: Gang Leader x Mayor's Daughter to Patreon. In the description, I wrote:

"I've been meaning to post this audio for a while, but I just could not get it right. I actually recorded and edited a different version of this audio, and as a treat to you, I will post the alternate version shortly. You'll get exclusive access to a scrapped audio, and you'll hear how the same story can unfold very differently during improvisation. Even my character's personality differs!"

Well here is said treat! Enjoy the scrapped version of Partners in Crime. 

P.S. Can you guess why I scrapped this version in the comments? There are a few reasons. I wonder if you notice them, too. Do you like version 1 or 2 better?