Elemental Gatherers Book 7 Patreon Draft Chapters 1-10 (Patreon)

I meant to post this yesterday, but the day got away from me. Trying to incorporate some of y’all’s comments while filling in blanks. Got through chapter 10 so far, is the changes working?

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-_kgFT5sREG8HlQAVctHprujrKK25BcCCg1VRapabys/edit

Thanks for y’all’s support!