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I meant to post this yesterday, but the day got away from me. Trying to incorporate some of y’all’s comments while filling in blanks. Got through chapter 10 so far, is the changes working?


https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-_kgFT5sREG8HlQAVctHprujrKK25BcCCg1VRapabys/edit


Thanks for y’all’s support!

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Anonymous

With the intent of compressing the first draft a bit more to add some punch: The fight with Bruno is where you begin to drift off the outline schedule. Maybe compact the fights a bit? Most of chapter 10 about selling the path forward and the resulting benefits could be merged into the chapter with other races earlier? (Chapter 3)

Anonymous

Still looking it over, but wanted to ask if Legacy of the M'Zee is going to be on audio book?