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Howdy awesome people! First off, thank you so much for supporting me on my endeavors in writing. I have a couple of questions for those of y'all willing to spend the time to answer.

First off, how is the frequency of posts? Should I split the Mana Daemons posts over the week or keep doing two on Sunday? Should I separate the Mana Daemons from the Elemental Gatherers posting days?


How are both my stories? Do they make sense, flowing okay, pacing, etc? Any comments or feedback would be appreciated! I want to become a better writer, and need assistance in doing so. Thanks!

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Kat

I think that seperate days for different series sounds like a good idea 😊

Anonymous

Maybe Tuesday and Thursday for mana demons and Sunday for elemental gatherers I do have to admit though that I have yet to read much of mana demons With that being said elemental gatherers seems to be flowing smoothly

Anonymous

I like the idea of different days, means I don't have to wait as long between bits. Both stories seem to be flowing well and I'm enjoying both. Couple questions for you, 1. Can you see our edits in Mana daemons? 2. Do you have a time frame for it's release? Been watching for a pre-order on Amazon.

Don Stanwick

I like both of the books so far. I do like the idea of separate dates for each one. In regards to content, I would prefer to see things more flushed out and expanded on. For example in EG4, chapter 5, the climbing of the tower. I would like to seem more of what Aiden's team goes through. It is quick and it is hard to feel excited for it. I know you are trying to keep them shorter for younger readers but I think some areas should be expanded on. Overall, flow is good and I will definitely be buying both books.

authorchrisvines

Yup, I can see the edits. Thanks! Not sure on the timeline. I still need to figure out what I want for the cover, get it made, verify that the name is really what I want, get an edit done on it, all after I finish putting it up here. Its got 27 chapters right now.

authorchrisvines

Thanks for the feedback! I put in my notes to go back and expand that section. On the book length, I will probably let EG4 go higher than Condensation did, which was already my longest novel. Looking at Harry Potter, again aimed at lower level readers, the fourth book and beyond really shot up in word count. So I might let this one just go until it’s done. We’ll see how big it gets!