Computer second draft (Patreon)

Hey, so it still has obvious problems, but I gotta let it go. I've made notes for what I want to change before I post in public but that'll be after recording and editing other stuff for here. It's good enough. I've been working on it since I posted the last one and barely perceivable changes.  When I rerender I'll let you know. I'm giving up for now.

notes: 

-the part where I talk about my brother is gone and needs to be brought back

-the ears on the echo aren't correct and are flipped, the echo should be on the ear that it corresponds with.

-it may be too dark

-some parts may be too loud

-there isn't enough going on with the audio layering

-I had a cold for a couple of lines

-check that all the adjustment layers are lined up where they should be