SPOILER- rough cut of video opening (Patreon)

Hey I've been working entirely on the costume and scene for the carnival video, I don't think it'll be ready exactly at halloween but if I push hard, maybe. I'm only going to make small tweaks to this and if you could give me feedback let me know. I'll show you the second part when that's improved too. the eyes and the editing need work obviously but let me know if anything else looks too weird or fake. I'll probably try to touch up the paint on the clown entrance and maybe add a city scape in the back. If I can find time I will program the lights on the sign to flicker.