Bella's Tantrum Layout/Dialog/Inner Thoughts? (Patreon)

Hello all! I have been working on the next animation section and should have a preview by tomorrow. Once again, its a bit complicated but I think its turning out pretty good so far!

In the mean time, we are coming up on Bella's solo tantrum sections so I wanted to run some ideas by you on how you think we should proceed. I would love some feedback on the dialog and I have also 2 bonus scenes ideas proposed.

While, I dont want this animation to take forever to produce, I think these bonus scenes could be fun and add to the animation. Let me know your thoughts.

As for the dialog here, I want Bella to sound a little bit like a "potty mouth". If you remember in AML3 when she was cumming she got pretty crude during her cumshot and I think its a cute/sexy personality quirk of hers.

Tantrum Scene 1)

Bella is in the kitchen wearing a shirt and some panties. She is setting some veggies on the pan next to the chicken she is about to bake.

(inner thoughts)"Oh this is so unfair! (pause while she puts some veggies on the pan) Oh no... I hope she isnt fucking her ass... "

Tantrum Scene 2)

Bella is in the kitchen leaning on the counter next to the oven with her arms crossed looking worried.

(inner thoughts) "UGH I wish I was in there... (pause while she stares at her panties) fucking fuckity fuck sticks my cock is throbbing so bad... (pause while she tinks) You dont want to let me play anymore? Ill show you!" (Bella grins)

Tantrum Scene 3)

Bella is in the kitchen in front of an open oven with her chiken and veggie dinner sitting in the middle. Her cock is hanging over her panties and she is jacking off feverishly while humping the air with her eyes closed.

(said out load) "You like this big cock Mary? (pause while she jacks off a sec) OH FUCK Take my fucking cum you big fat milf bitch! Take my cum right up your stupid fat ass!!!" (various orgasm sounds)

**BONUS IDEA 1 (MAYBE) Anna in standing in the hallway with a WTF face and sees Bella yelling and cumming on the chicken and just kinda rolls her eyes and walks to her room

• This would be fairly easy to do and maybe only add an extra day or two of work but serves as a nice little teaser of Anna for AML5.

**BONUS IDEA 2 (MAYBE) Maggie, Mary and Bella are sitting in the bed and Mary says,"This chicken is great!" and Maggie says,"It kinda tastes like someone spooged all over it..." Mary looks at Bella (END)

• This would be a bit more complicated and probably add at least 3-5 days of work to the animation.

 (For reference here in the basic layout of the rest of the animation)

• Scene 11 - Maggie pushes Mary off of her
• Scene 12 - Mary asks "Are you ok?"
• Scene 13 - Maggie says "Yes! I just needed a second, please dont stop"
• Scene 14 - Bella's kitchen tantrum part 1
• Scene 15 - Face fucking position #2 start
• Sceen 16 - Face fucking position #2 harder
• Scene 17 - Bella's kitchen tantrum part 2
• Scene 18 - Face fucking position #3 start
• Scene 19 - Face fucking position #3 ultra hard
• Scene 20 - Face fucking Marys cumming part 1
• Scene 22 - Face fucking Mary cumming part 2 
• Scene 23 - I love you!
• Scene 24 - Can I stick my dick in your butt? 
• Scene 25 - MAGGIE LYNN??
• Scene 26 - Ok ok just dont be rough with me
• Scene 27 - Bella's kitchen tantrum cum shot
• Scene Bonus (MAYBE) - Anna sees Bella jacking off on the chicken and rolls her eyes and walks off to her room.
• Scene 28 - Maggie cums
• Scene 29 - Bella walks in on Maggie inside Marys ass (ORIGINAL ENDING)
• Scene Bonus MAYBE) - Mary - Wow Bella this chicken is great! (ALTERNATIVE ENDING)