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Animation Preview *SOUND WARNING* OMG What the hell? (Patreon)

Published:
2018-02-20 20:20:38
Imported:
2020-08

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So, I am not super happy with this section yet but wanted to share my rough draft. I wanted to show Bella getting hard but this little tantrum section is kinda short... I may just have her start off hard in the next section and not show the erection at all here.

I dunno... what do you think?

Files

OMGWTH.mp4

Comments

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AgentRedGirl

Should I take the whole erection part out? It doesn't look right to me =/

bigwiggy

I'd say include it as Bella standing there wide eyed while saying how wrong it is as she gets hard is really hot!

Anonymous

I think it's fine but it comes up too quick. She should react and then perhaps look away and then back, and then as she starts to get into it she starts slowly getting her erection.

Anonymous

Or maybe Bella grabs her cock and starts jerking it hard (she's angry) rather than hands-free erection, in this case?

Anonymous

The idea of her going from outraged to turned on is really great. I do agree that it's a little too simultaneous in this clip. I'd love to see the transition happen, and her getting harder as she watches, after the initial shock wears off. It would almost be a crime to not let us see her dick slip out of those sporty short shorts.

Anonymous

Cut back and forth between Mary and Maggie fucking and Bella watching. Each time We see Bella, she is less angry and more aroused. She she pops free, she'd be nearly erect, I think. Not mostly flaccid. Like 7 second mark or so.

michael whipps

You can always improve anything....how much is up to you (I think its fine).After a final polish maybe.

AgentRedGirl

I got rid of her erection happening here but will show it a different way.

Anthony Foster

I personally love this; although slowing it down a little would be cool!