Danger Zone One (Ch. 1/Part 1) Script (Patreon)

Now that we're already up to 10 pages of Danger Zone One, I figured it was the perfect time to post the correlating script pages. 

The script differs from the finished work in several areas. Some of the panel layouts have been changed (usually Katsu improved these thanks to his keen visual eye) and I made some last minute dialogue alterations.

Check out the attached file! There are various ways to write a comic script, but I've found this method works best for me. Also note that the descriptive language in the script may be a bit simplistic. This was done because Katsu's native tongue isn't English, so it was important to be as clear and precise, without getting overly wordy, as possible.