A Better Tomorrow Pages 1-2 (WIP) (Patreon)

It took me *all week* to ink these pages. I don't know what's been wrong with me other than I think I'm pretty burned out and I can see it in the artwork.... I'm a lil scared to send these pages to my client bc I know I can do better but I'm also like damn I worked *really hard* on them even though they're not good hhhhhh

I do really like most of the 2nd page though. I think those shoes came out pretty good and I enjoyed drawing them! But everything else damn idk.... Plus the first page *needs* to be good because that's the first thing people are gonna see aaaa

I don't really even know how I could make it better? I think maybe I'll redraw the faces in the past panel because they just look a bit off to me.....

It's also possible I'm just overthinking this massively but weewoo. Being a professional artist just Be like this sometimes xD