Thoughts on Girl's Night and Kaylee (so far?) (Patreon)

Hey, since it's could be as much as a week before the final version of Kaylee 16 is ready, I thought I'd just go ahead and ask for feedback now. 

Hopefully people like Girl's Night, I think it has a different "flavor" than most of my comics even though the content is theoretically similar. I think Adele is going to be the fan favorite character, but even if Cynthia isn't as sexy I think it makes for a fun dynamic to have her as the main character. Hopefully she wasn't too annoying!

With Kaylee 16, the sequence I showed is basically complete (aside from the script not being edited yet.) The only thing I was toying with the idea of adding is a brief, teasing insertion scene where Kaylee is testing out different ways to get Kayla to grow, probably before she tries to "feed" her sister a bunch of tinies. I know that's one thing a lot of people were hoping to see... But I held back because I didn't know if it fit the dynamic between the characters this chapter, and I'm still not sure if it does.

Hopefully most people liked this chapter so far! I know some people don't like how the series has become more about the rivalry between Kaylee and Kayla in recent chapters, but that was always the plan for the series and it's going to continue through the remaining chapters. The full version of the comic will have 75 new renders, most of which center around a big sequence that I've only shared one teaser pic of so far! And I just finished the size comparison pic last night, which also kind of doubles as a teaser for a location that's probably going to be in the comic next chapter...