your honest & valued opinion... is the sound ok in this? (Patreon)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=udF0sHQd6g4&feature=youtu.be

i edited this entire thing on my bose quietcomfort headphones and sound was perfect for me even though i lowered the film audio, so it doesn't get picked up for copyright...but i do understand that not everyone will be listening to it this way....so is it ok? i'd rather know and re-edit & re-upload, than get a million comments hounding me about it