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3 NEW WRITERS!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE let me know what you think! (Patreon)

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2021-09-22 16:55:54
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2023-07

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Hey guys we are working with 3 new writers!  I would love for you to let me know what you think of each of them if you get a chance. 

Please let me know so that I order more from whichever writers you like!

PLEASE REMEMBER THIS IS A "BOOK CLUB"  so you guys shouldn't be afraid of writing a little in the comments.  I want to get artists and stories the YOU LIKE!  

It's very difficult to gauge what you like if you aren't giving feedback on the artists and stories.  

If there is something you like about the writers style, let me know. 

If there is something about the writer that you didn't like let us know. 

 If you didn't like the premise but like the writing let me know.

If you loved the premise but hated the writer let me know. 


PLEASE!!!  I don't want to spend the sites finances on something that you aren't enjoying.  :)   


  • WesT 

His first story is: Cuck'ed by Callie.  I thought was pretty decent.  Please be honest and let me know what you think.  

https://www.patreon.com/posts/cucked-by-callie-56432804 


  • IZZY

This writer is another female writer and  has been up for a few days and some people are already giving feedback on her... Please let me know what YOU think.

https://www.patreon.com/posts/sorry-sissy-by-56195831 



  • Stellar5

This is a POC Female writer!  And I must say is my fave of the new auditions.  Please let me know what you think.  I want to order more from her. 

https://www.patreon.com/posts/new-writer-43-56472024



Comments

devin dickie
>>68356269

Is it the subject matter? or the realism. You didn't like Cuckold Crisis! (I loved that one)

Katie Kisscock

Hey so I will read the other 2 stories later but for now here’s my review of: “Cuck'ed by Callie” by WesT Ok tbh, it a good start for a series and it’s an interesting idea. The concept of a pathetic submissive loser beta husband with a micro penis and a bombshell wife getting cucked by a BBC is a HOT subject and a fun fantasy to play around with. However, truthfully I didn’t really like the story bc so much of it was the inner dialogue of Dave talking about how much of a insecure loser he was because he knew he couldn’t sexually satisfy his wife in the way a BBC can. As a sissy with a tiny clitty myself, I know exactly how it feels to just “KNOW” you don’t have the proper “equipment” down there to fuck a girl to a proper orgasm. BUT I was just so annoyed at Dave’s unwillingness to even experiment with ANYTHING with Callie sexually when she’s obviously soooo willing to try anything. In this fantasy, so often is the case where the wife is rather aggressive and harsh, actively bullying the husband into sissification/feminization which naturally leads to being cucked by a BBC in the end. So I appreciated this fresh take on a loving relationship where Callie genuinely loves Dave and wants to do anything to spice up their sex life. Which is why reading this story only made me feel incredibly frustrated at Dave. Like, I’m totally on Callie’a side here because…. Like for fucksake man, get it together Dave! You have a Callie as your wife, she chose you! You already won! Accept that and communicate with your wife to express your feelings and being willing to submit to less “manly” methods of pleasuring your wife such as using your tongue, fingers, and toys! Like ugh!! I really don’t like it when a character is set up as a “winner” and is so blinded by their fears and insecurities they act like a total “loser”. It’s just such an unattractive but honest trait of many submissive loser husbands with tiny dicks. If this was the writers intention, then they succeed at creating a total loser for a main character. In the end, I think WesT did a good job of setting up the characters and the groundwork for a series between the trials and tribulations of Callie and Dave. Hopefully Dave and Callie can mend their relationship before Dave’s fears are self actualized and Callie leaves his pathetic ass for good because at least right now Dave is such an unlikeable character.

Katie Kisscock

A review of: Sorry, Sissy! by Iz In a similar manner to West, I found the world-building of the story to be quite good, and having read the backstories of our main characters I could immediately build a connection to the struggles of Stephen and Whitney. I particularly loved the writer’s ability to paint a picture of a scene such as illustrating how Whitney looks like a sexy wet dream to Stephan even when she’s asleep. However, as I read the story, I found myself skimming through parts as the narrative became predictable and the pacing got slow as I grew annoyed at Stephen for falling into almost the exact same pitfall as Dave. Once more we have a pathetic little white boy whose insecurities and fears of having a 3-inch penis causes him so much stress and anxiety that he actively distancing himself from the love of his life even though she never had any complaints. No shame on Iz as she is a good writer, but the storytelling wasn’t anything that was captivating, at least for me. Please note I am nothing but a fan of Devin Dickie and the community he’s building, but when I come to QoS Bookclub, my goal is to read titillating stories about white boys getting turned into sissies with some of my favorite elements including that of reluctance, humiliation, and acceptance. (for the purpose of wanking) As of right now, if a person were to ask me if I would pay money to come back to this story, I would say no because as is, the story is just nothing “special”. I do encourage all writers to read the works of Nikki Jenkins, Ann Michelle, and Daring Diane. These are all TG authors on Amazon and while they're by no means household names I think their writing is some of the best I’ve seen on the sissy/feminization subject.

devin dickie
>>68793132

Wonderful feedback!! That's what I'm talking about! The feedback is wonderful as I am trying new artists to find a blend of narrative intelligence coupled with the sexy bits, so I think I let the pendulum sway too far in one direction. I must tell you, I think you might really enjoy the next writer I found. :) I am posting next month. Please feel free to review ANY STORY. I love it :)

Katie Kisscock

A review of: "The Cuckold's Crisis” by Stellar5 Ok so forgive me for reading nearly identical stories in a row but man, am I tired of the loving perfect wife getting her relationship squandered by the pathetic insecure white boy husband with a micro penis. Like, oh my god, it doesn’t hit you until you’ve read multiple versions of the same story in a row that you come to realize how important honest and open communication is with your significant other and how unruly and unattractive it is to read when you’re trying to find material to wank off too hahaha. For the author’s part Stellar5 did write a really captivating set up for a story that I could have easily read another 3 parts for. More so than the other 2 authors, I could really feel the emotion both Calvin and Jane were going through. I was able to really cling onto the frustration in the air. The tension was so palpable, that it made this a super quick read, my eyes were just glued to the pages. That being said, the story still has problems. The story moved at a good pace, but there were several time skips that just “happened” like how chapter 3 just starts 2 weeks after a big fight and how chapter 5 starts a month later after another big fight. I’m not saying as a writer, time skips can’t be used effectively and that narratively it can’t work. But from the reader’s perspective, you got me all invested in the moment because our main couple just had a big fight and right as I’m on the edge of my seat, you skip to the future. I feel like I got cockblocked a resolution and was left with a feeling of frustration. I feel like I was cruising towards the climax of the story, then the screen went black and by the time the image returned, I had missed everything. And wow, talk about throwing cold water on a sleeping cat; the ending was so sudden and abrupt that I was mimicking Jane line for line in that final moments. “’Fuck you, Stellar5!", the reader threw his hands up in frustration and stormed away angrily’” 😉 Overall, the writer has talent and a strong ability to illustrate the scene and portray effectively the emotion that going on. If I had to pick, out of the 3 stories I just read, this is the best one and the author should get another story to write. However, the ending leaves a lot to be desired and I’m left pondering what will Calvin end up doing. **On a side note, I’m not a huge fan of Calvin attempting to commit suicide in the final moments of the story either. I do enjoy dark moments in my stories from time to time but if I remind myself that the purpose of reading these stories on QoS Bookclub that I pay a monthly subscription for, is to read stories that “get me off”, then I’d rather not have suicide in a story that already struggled to give me even one sexy bit.