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Noctis Umbra - Prologue (Patreon)

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2019-01-03 15:35:55
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2024-02
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Prologue chapter of Noctis Umbra is finally finished! I'll be working on editing and getting it ready for a release on rinmarugames this weekend. 

As Patrons, you can play it without ads here!

Warning: Only works on Chrome or Firefox. It won't work with Explorer.

If you are playing via Iphone or Ipad, the voices may not work.

https://rinmaruexclusive.com/2018/12/24/noctis-umbra-alpha-0-01/

Looking forward to your feedback!

Next up; Finishing Calling Cipher - Matt!

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Anonymous

I can't wait to play the full story. I Don't know how you come up with such great plots all the time, it honestly BLOWS my mind :') I'm impressed and proud at the same time. I do feel like the prologue leads you to have some kind of preference to Valerius first, but Ae-ri also caught my attention (it's shallow, but she's so cute, her little pink sweater is just adorable). I felt involved in the story, so my only "complain" (if we can even call it that) is that the "flirt options" are a little bit too…obvious? But at the same time, I'm not sure how you could present it properly for the player to know when there are actually flirting with a character. I don't remember perfectly for Cardinal Cross, but if I recall properly, you changed the color of the answer with some hearts? Or added some heartbeats in the background? The dream sequence also appeared a bit "abstract" to me. I'll try to play it again, since english isn't my first language - but I was a little bit lost about what was happening. Anyways, that's the only thing I could point out because the rest of the game is on point. I am obsessed with your stories and characters! You're always working so hard: thank you!!

rinmaru
>>18581485

Ty soooo much for the help! I changed the flirt options to a pink colored text instead of (flirt)! I also changed the dream sequence a little. Making the background black and white. =) TYTYTY <3!

Seven Messinger

This is such a great concept and I can't wait for more to be released!