Faith, Draft 1, 1_5, outline, CH 28 (Patreon)
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2021-09-26 13:28:03
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2022-07-07 10:29:35
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2022-09
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Faith in the Family, Commentary, CH 28
And Thomas is on the run again, but with a new skill to help, maybe.
I make decisions on the spot, as I write, that work, and some that don’t work as well. Ben fixed some of that, but there’s one where I think I’ll have to adjust a bit in the 2<sup>nd</sup> draft. Thomas is basically running for his life, and the way Ben wrote the scene there a calmness to Thomas I don’t think belongs there.
So that’s it on the comments, I hope you enjoy the file