Faith, Draft 1, 1_5, outline, CH 28 (Patreon)

And Thomas is on the run again, but with a new skill to help, maybe.

I make decisions on the spot, as I write, that work, and some that don’t work as well. Ben fixed some of that, but there’s one where I think I’ll have to adjust a bit in the 2^nd draft. Thomas is basically running for his life, and the way Ben wrote the scene there a calmness to Thomas I don’t think belongs there.

So that’s it on the comments, I hope you enjoy the file