Faith, Draft 1, 1_5, outline, CH 20 (Patreon)

Faith in the Family, Commentary, CH 20
 
In which Thomas and family reach his grandfather for the holidays

Another one with little to say. Minor tweaking on Ben’s part. I did manage to have a “mistake” based on the outline. I had Roland and Thomas managing to have their separate bedrooms, only to be forced together again (ahhh, the Fates). The outline for the next chapter made a point of them not sharing bedroom, but I managed to make it work anyway.

Go me.

So that’s it on the comments, I hope you enjoy the file