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Thanks to hitting our $6000/month Milestone Goal, Patrons get to see my original script page now in addition to the regular updates.

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Anonymous

Honestly, "I'm not sure that I know what that means." is one of the better lines ever. It's so calm and yet so dismissive. One of those "Oh total bullsh*t!" lines that by the time the person - full of it - catches up, the moment has passed. She's just good at this. Of course anyone brought up by a smart woman in a high powered military family has seen more than her share of brass asshats, full of it. One of the best parts is that she comes off so clearly has having no need of the approval of the unworthy... one of the better traits for anyone to foster in themselves. So, there is no way she's going to rise to any bait. She's a really wonderful character Alex, you should be really proud of her. Thanks.

Benoit Comanne

So, the Pristine Ploteress was right, Commander seems to be the most dangerous of them all!

alexwoolfson

Thank you, Chris. Very glad you like that line. (I was concerned it might be too difficult to understand what she meant—but you definitely got it.) And very glad you like Commander. :)