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IHHAT Thoughts (Patreon)

Published:
2017-07-09 16:50:08
Imported:
2021-08

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What did you think of Volume 1? Thoughts, opinions, feel free to say what's on your mind. *adds rum to coffee*

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Blazingfox77

In all honesty it was very good

Tanamox

After reading the latest update, I've read the whole thing now. It's good. I like that the story was a little complex, that the characters were somewhat understandable and not just cardboard [even if some weren't sympathetic at all]. I like the romance aspect to it, a tender side rarely seen in other wg fetish series. Focusing on the WG aspect, which is why I came to and stuck with it, IHHAT was great early on with the WG sequences – the first two at Skylar's, and the ice cream one. However, it faltered in later chapters by minimizing those sequences too much. And with what happened on p75, I thought that would lead to something, like a bit of inflation, or at least another inside view of her womb, like we got on p70. But no, nothing came of it, so to speak. So, while I like it overall, I was disappointed that chapter six did not quite live up to the WG-Sexiness that the earlier chapters built up to. I hope that either the next volume, or another of your comics, will have more sexiness and/or weight gain, while not abandoning story entirely.

Viro
>>6071774

*taking notes* Glad you liked it overall. I'll definitely be doing less story in the future so that the themes pool in a bit more. Vol. 1 took a bit of the brunt of story mainly for world building but I do understand what you mean. Thank you for the feedback :3

Fractured_ichor

It's a great end to the first volume. I thought it was a very nice ending that the both got together. ☺️

Vulpix

I enjoyed it, I was hoping for more weight gain but I'm still happy with what happened. I kinda expected more to the story, pretty surprised it ended here.

MIDSUMMERNIGHTSDREAM

l loved it really, only I really wish there where more consequences for skylers actions. it would have had a nice build up to a big climax for for both characters her really learning what happened and what he is doing to her or the little brother coming to try and find his dead "as far as we know" sister and having a confrontation with skyler or the girl she picked on. I felt bad for tifeny with the deal she got but it happend and I would have loved to see skyler be confronted with the fact he committed cold blooded murder. I like stories that have real life consequences "at times' and aside from the fantasy WG stuff other problems like manipulation, and murder.

Viro
>>6074036

That's what the other stories are for. Some are connected, some aren't. Whether we learn more about the characters sooner is up to the polls :3

Chaotick9

I enjoyed the ride

ZeroZi

I fucking love it can't wait for voulme 2

murray webb

I enjoyed this Volume a lot, especially since i wanted a long read of a weight gain comic. I am a little disappointed that Marci never like questioned how she got SO FAT so fast

Viro
>>6077896

She questioned it, just sort of accepted it once Skylar confessed his love of fat girls X3

murray webb
>>6077896

Oh, I must have missed it then. I still would have loved to see them try to have a more normal date with her at that size. like Marci trying to fit in a booth of a restaurant while being so fat

Anonymous

There was quite a bit of drama in it, it had some dark and insidious revelations, but all an all quite an enjoyable read. I look forward to reading more of it in the the future.

DeltaFox3

Great volume, actually hoping if things go well in the long long term we see extra volumes or "continuations" of characters, aka Marcie 1 year later ;)

Viro
>>6083753

Glad you liked it. Yeah I have much planned if they get to come up. Marci and Skylar's first date will eventually be a choice :3

WaxerRed

Wow, just yesterday I was able to finish the last chapter (I changed banks and ended up missing last weeks password. I know I picked a hell of a week to do it.) I am extremely satisfied with the ending, I know some people were hoping for Skylar to get punished for his actions, or a dark Marci death ending, but I think I like a "happily ever after" ending the best for those two. (Though I still wouldn't shy away from seeing dark stories in the future, or a darker "what if story" for an evil Skylar fattens Marci to death if it was put in Cream-Filled.) . But as for thoughts on the first volume of IHHAT I loved it. The community needs more longer plot driven stories. The best part for me has to be the characters, at first each seems a simple stereotype, Tiffany the head cheerleader Bitch, Blake the goth best friend, and Skylar the jock who loves to fatten women. But you grew them into a lot more real character to care about as you wrote in each back story and made them unique, Tiffany has a seemingly abusive home and jealously loves Skylar, Blake has her whole mysterious past with her family, and Skylar made a deal with the devil. In chapter one it felt like the plot was just a vehicle to show off the weight gain, but by the end the two fit together perfectly, so great work! Your art and writing are really really spectacular together. . Just to be honest I did have two small criticisms, The first half of the FlashBack arc felt like the low point in the series to me, though I cant exactly put my finger on why it just didn't POP like the rest of the series did. It wasn't awful, I liked Skylars cooking powers explained, but it felt just a bit to long in some areas. The other criticism is just that with both Marci and Tiffany there was a cut away between obese and blob, we didn't get to see them grow into that point. I like weight gain as much as the next guy, (actually probably significantly more then the next guy.) but I did not mind( and even really enjoyed) the plot between each of the feeding sessions, but with all the build-up I would have preferred that the feeding be just a few pages longer.. and maybe have seen Marci in blob form, (the one before her final transformation) just a bit longer. . Also just in general, great work on your artwork improving. It was crazy to see it reading the commentary, but the jump from chapter 2 to 3 and 3 to 4 was amazing. . And now after slamming you with that wall of text (sorry) do you mind if I ask some of your thoughts on the first volume of IHHAT? What were your favorite and least favorite aspects of the comic? What choices are you glad you made, what do you regret, and is there anything you wish you could rewrite? What made you decide to go from a three chapter dark story, to a six chapter Romance story? You said just a bit ago you wanted volume six to go on for a few more weeks, and while I was satisfied with where it ended what made you change your mind about it and end it now? Are there any closing messages you want to say now?

Viro
>>6171501

Glad you liked the story. Favorite part was just drawing it in general, it was fun to do. Least favorite was probably just making the backgrounds lol. Mostly changed things so that it wasn't a one-off comic and would become a bigger world. Nothing really to close with since there will be more stuff soon