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Patreon Suggestion - Forced to be The Bride(Animated) (Patreon)

Published:
2022-05-03 20:04:34
Edited:
2022-05-04 13:36:51
Imported:
2022-05

Content

Here's the finished art, and I was able to fix that little typo. If you ever find any mistakes, please let me know. English is not my first language, so it's a way for me to get better at it. :)

Hope you all enjoy the art! ❤

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Comments

Zero Wing

What a lovely gown!

Cakey

I love the outfit, and concept. I think a bit of a more embarassed expression would suit the situation and text better. The mouth reflects a look of concern decently, but the rest of the face reflects more of an excited expression, which detracts from the "forced" intent of the scene. Things that can help with a concerned look, could be lowering the eyebrow then adding a slightly more upward inclinded peak of the eyebrows, a couple forehead wrinkles, dilated pupils, a very slight dip in the upper eye lids, etc. Since it's cartooney, possible even a worried sweat droplet on the side of their face. Additionally, body language can also help with a concerned reaction. The bride in this scene is posed with a sense of feminine confidence, shown by the graceful positioning of the hands and confident stance in heels. A more concerned reaction, might have the bride with their knees together, but their feet spread a bit apart while toes pointing inward. The hands could be held upward and away from the body with the elbows low, and fingers splayed out in an almost clawlike position as if they might lose balance in their heels, or they don't know where to rest their hands with all the femme fluff of the dress. Sorry for the long reply. It's intended to be constructive to help you as an artist, not an attack on this drawing. It can be difficult to improve as an artist if everyone only responds "Looks great!".

Alesha

I love the dress and the overall look! Amazing work :)

pinkhorizons
>>83183408

I came up with the dialogue later, that's why it doesn't fit with the whole image. To be honest, I'm not happy drawing characters in forced situations, I feel quite uncomfortable with that. Thanks anyway.