Pages 1-5 Roughs (Patreon)

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2024-02-25 23:30:41

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I'm sick as a dog this weekend with a regular - keeping me down for the count cold. So not much typing to go with the update.

Really wanted to get you all the roughs for the first 5 pages this week! I feel kinda... frustrated and happy at the same time, with a lot of these. Some work super well for me, and others feel same-y and the poses/camera is maybe repetitive. But I was struggling with throwing the camera around, as it was sort of killing the conversation so ... I dunno. Maybe my brain is not up to the task this week, and maybe I'll revisit these pages as I go.

I expanded the start ever so slightly with an exterior zooming-in-shot to establish and ditched the idea of keeping the cage reveal for later - turns out I can't wait to draw it, and I know YOU want to see it too ;D Plus... I just couldn't fathom how to do these pages without some reveal. Plus... it enhances intimacy? That moment your partner locks you up is POWERFUL and I didn't want to miss that, by trying to hide things.

After these pages, I'll do a fast-into-the-metro page and then pick up the story from there. Cut some space down a bit by leaping from the metro straight to the front door of Owens I think.

For style - I'm thinking I want something between what I was doing for the QnA, and the last chapter? But I'll see how that feels once I start this next week.

Ok you guys I'm gonna go back to bed, and hope to feel better tomorrow.

OH! And I made a SketchUp for the exterior of Judy and Nicks! Was happy with this one!

And a question for the higher-tiers; What do we think - should Judy and Nick be partially clotehd in this scene? Naked? Underwear? I can't figure it out....

Also maybe it's the cold but... I love the idea of giving Judy a glass butt-plug that has a small-knot-shape =D

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