Page 5 WIP Pencils update (Patreon)

Tiny short middle-of-the-week update for you all - I wasn't able to work on the page over the weekend as I'd hoped, so this is the progress so far! Figure you all deserved to see where I'm at. Hoping to finish out the pencils and flats by the end of *this weekend*. Fingers crossed!!!

I'm struggling a bit with the standing pose- originally I had Nick on his knees eating a bit of Ass! But, the text that goes with it is all about looking Judy into Nick's eyes... so I'm thinking of having the two of them stand next to each other as she strokes him off? For context - it's a different flashback to the previous pages, so I could dress them up however I like.

If you're a higher tier let me know what you'd think would look better for that 2nd panel!?

The perspective on the big image is still strange... but I'm not as worried - it'll crop out and it's time for me to move on! I always struggle with putting the camera behind their heads and getting a good perspective from it.

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