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+ deleted panel that would've gone on the end here for added comedy. I decided against it because I think the story will flow better on to 20.5 without it.

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Anonymous

Maybe this is just the way I talk I guess, but I briefly did a double take at "But really it was so good!", since I was like wait she already said that. I think the format looks good overall and isn't worth changing, but figured I'd mention it in case.

Krankar Volund

I love that people are becoming more open to Tess now that she had a cool girlfriend. It would be really bad if it was a fake girlfriend, right? :p

walkingnorth

I've been mulling this over but no one else has said anything, and Parker feels to me like she'd talk in that repetitive way, so I think I'll keep it as is. Thank you for the feedback though, very appreciated!