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 1 Title page - dramatic cloud background

2

-Tala stares up

- then at her feet - she wiggles her feet

- then beams at them [I was five when I first dreamed that I could fly]

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- beat panel of Tala floating

- [And the dream was so beautiful, so vivid] beaming Tala fades into

- sleeping Tala

- then distance shot [that when I woke up

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- Tala sits up - and starts - tearing up

- Full on crying 

[ when I woke up and found that I was grounded-]

- curtains twitch - mum sticks her head in - Tala looks at her, still crying

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"It's okay, dearheart, hush hush, " It's was just a dream, it's over now"

[I was crying too hard to explain.] [But I don't think she would have understood anyway.]

"Now that you're awake you'll be okay."

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Mum scoops Tala up - "Tala you're so cold, you need tea."

"Let's mix in some coconut with the cumin, you like that."

[I didn't think that anyone would ever understand.]


Comments

Kaiyeti

Ari this is so beautiful and breathtaking. I truly can't wait for the completed version. Thank you for sharing this. *yetihug*

Anonymous

As always it’s fascinating to see how you make refinements to arrive at your final and imo best version. Can’t wait for more!

walkingnorth

Thank youuuuu <3 But there is no further completed version for this, the page 6 mentioned in the script got smooshed into page 5! I'll only be posting scripts/thumbnails for scenes that have already been completed and posted :)