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ep. 75 script + deleted panel wips (Patreon)

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2017-05-20 16:17:35
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2024-02
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Zen (Marty)

Once again, the finished product is superior! I don't know why, but there's something I really like about the way you worded Line 13 in the comic as opposed to t he script. "I treated Austen like a child, not a partner" has a certain ... elegance to it that the more detailed stuff about protecting Austen didn't have. It gets across the same basic meaning, treating someone like a child is frequently trying to protect them, but it is simpler and it also has broader implications beyond protectiveness. It is really well worded! (In other words, I know you feel like you're struggling with your writing right now, but you're doing well! Really! It is great! Heartwarming, heartbreaking, and wonderful! And that music!!!)

walkingnorth
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Thank you both so much, this means a lot :) Maybe writing block works like art block, and if I'm struggling it means my sense of taste has improved faster than my technical skills. Maybe? It's an uplifting thought.