Afterword - The Sun I Can't See - Chapter 3 (Patreon)

Please make sure you read The Sun I Can See - Chapter 3 before reading this text as it contains spoilers.

Hey! So this was The Sun I Can’t See - Chapter 3. I hope you were happy with who Alex had inadvertently kissed in chapter 2. Actually, this all started as a joke while talking with my test reader.

I posted one of my best stories on Literotica, and it got horrible reviews. For some reason, I am targeted by some people, and when I post something in the BDSM section, they jump on my stories and rate them 1 out of 5. That is every single time, and there is no reason for it. I think it was The Sun I Can’t See chapter 2, one of my best works ever that got nuked.

Anyway, I woke up in the morning, and that story was rated 1.5 stars out of 5 … Clearly, that makes no sense because my stories are not that bad. But right next to it, there was another story about a creepy Uncle sleeping with his barely 18 years old niece who was lactating, and that one was rated 5 out of 5… it was so bad. So my test reader and I were just joking and told me that I should start writing incest stories. And that is when I decided to make Alex kiss her sister by accident.

I have no intention of turning Alex into a sister lover… It was a honest mistake, but I will re-use her sister for something else in Chapter 4. :) It was actually a good thing that she showed up. Chapter 4 will be very fun because of this little joke.

Outside that, I wanted to work a little bit on Miles. He didn’t get a lot of attention so far, so it was fair to do a bit of psychology with him at the beginning of the chapter. But I have a secret, and maybe you’ll realize that I had been doing the same thing in my other stories…

My secret is… I didn’t plan anything! For some reason, for 2 chapters I wrote about Miles, then in chapter 3, when I looked at him, everything he had done so far was consistent… I created a voyeur without realizing it. When that scene where Alex is enumerating the different scenes where he displayed that behavior, it was me who was discovering it at the same time.

Then to prove her acceptance of that trait, since Miles loved to see two rubber girls together, Alex invited Mei over.

Actually, I have liked Mei since the beginning. It was not obvious in Chapter 2, but to me it was… she didn’t care too much about the other people, she just wanted some fun experience. I knew she was going to be a loner… and who says loner says Self-bondage.

It’s the first time in one of my stories that I use self-bondage. It is one of the things I like personally, and I thought it would be interesting to explore it in writing. 

Because Alex is blind, I presumed that she didn’t know much about this. Perhaps I have a misconception that blind people aren’t exposed as much as we are to different kinks and fun—particularly the rarest ones such as self-bondage.

I have to admit that all the self-bondage included in that story were things I actually saw during my lifetime. I was probably around 13-14 years old when I started experimenting with self-bondage, so I’ve seen way too much for my own good.

Overall, this was a pretty straightforward chapter. It was, at least to me, filled with hot things and plain fun. That chapter was different, but I don’t regret it.

Chapter 4 will go back to the Fox & Spice, and some cool things will happen. I hope you liked 3 enough to read chapter 4 (which will be the last one). I finished drafting it, but I decided to scrap some parts of it and recreate some portions. So I’m not sure exactly when I’ll post it. Maybe at the end of August.

My efforts are currently on Feliformia 11 and Girls and Bridle. Those are going to be published very soon. :)

Thanks so much for reading and I hope you'll appreciate with is coming down the pipe. Many cool stories are in the queue. :)

TS