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Work in Progress: Peach's Training (Patreon)

Published:
2021-08-26 23:16:46
Imported:
2021-10

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Hey, everyone! This month has been a lot busier than I was anticipating, and I wasn't able to do much 3D stuff as I'd have liked to. I usually don't post work in progress stuff because I like to just drop the final thing. (I think it takes away from the magic, a little bit, to be honest!)

That said, I didn't want to leave you all hanging, especially since quite a few new supporters have popped up since I started re-uploading everything to Newgrounds. (Hi, by the way, and thanks for your support!!)

As such, here's a link to my current work in progress: 

Peach's Slave Training WIP

It's just a simple little loop right now, though I intend to give it a proper background, sound, and maybe another Princess or two in the background of the full 16:9 aspect ratio version. Should I continue with this project, or maybe just leave it as is and move on to something else? Anything I should change? I'd love to hear your suggestions for the final product!

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Heru Solares

The dildo could be pistoning back and forth, while the black spiked ring rotates. (the ring, not the entire dildo) Bowser or Wendy could pass by. pressing a hand on the back of Peach's head to push her deeper.

Drift

I'd love to see her suddenly have to deep throat it and have a full body retching reaction.

SaunterWing!

This is more of an animation critique, but (assuming the rig allows), I think she should move in a circular pattern, pushing from her hips, rather than simply going back and forth. I did a draw-over that integrates the arms to show what I mean. Looking good otherwise! I think Bowser's Dungeon or treasure hoard would be a good fit for this. Maybe Daisy "training" with the troops/on another machine in the background as well? Either way, great start, and keep it up! https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/651557850262536213/880624300200194108/peachCrit.gif

onmodel3d
>>66589057

Ooh, this is actually super helpful and I really appreciate it! Admittedly I'm not sure how much I can translate it onto my rig- I'm working without IKs here so I kinda have to lock bones entirely in place to keep her stable in any capacity haha.

Anonymous

I think you should keep going with it, it looks good so far! I agree with everyone saying forced deep throat

Horny on Side

I like where it is and the other ideas people are having, but personally not a fan of her facial expression. idk if it's just me, but it looks more bored than anything else. Feel like she should be more annoyed at being forced to practice deep throating / to do slave training

Drift
>>66623267

I always prefer a scared/overwhelmed reaction to an annoyed one, especially for Peach. That's more of Daisy's thing.

Horny on Side
>>66623267

Agreed. Scared / Overwhelmed would be better than annoyed for Peach. As long as it's something more than just bored

onmodel3d
>>66623267

To clarify a bit, it's meant to be moreso a hypnotic trance, which'll be better shown with some particles/effects in the final product. Might still change it based on the feedback here, though!

Horny on Side
>>66623267

I can see the trance now that you've said it. I think I'd still personally prefer a different facial expression but that's just me. I'd also be down for hypno stuff too, the missing particles just made it look off to me I guess.

The Tickling Master (K. C.)

I think if you are aiming for hypnotized, something is missing, like the eyes being affected. I prefer scared or annoyed over the bored expression