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[DOWNLOAD] Colosseum PART III (Patreon)

Published:
2021-06-24 20:38:27
Edited:
2021-06-29 15:09:08
Imported:
2021-08

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So my first attempt at writing something with a story! I'm very, very nervous about it. It feels like a dangerous thing to attempt but I do feel like I need to do this, just doing images is starting to feel stale.

After this I will probably do some lighter stuff, this one is pretty rough.
In the future I want to separate the stories by non-canon stuff like this and canon stuff like something I'll talk about when I have something to show.

Hope you like it;

attached are three zip files, two for the 38 images, separated because it was too big to upload otherwise and one with the story.

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Rikyla

This is wonderful. I know you were nervous about this and from your concerns you shared over discord I understand why but this is honestly great. I know I had glimpses during the editing phase on streams but I tried to ignore the context a lot so it be fresh as it could be when the set was fully released. The writing in this: if someone told me this was their first time ever writing I wouldn't believe them as this doesn't seem like a first attempt but rather a regular release in their catalogue. I like the little dialogue sections between the characters, especially Bula and Nina. Writing adds more to images but so does the interactions of characters. Them looking at each other you can form an idea in your head what they might think but seeing them speak to each it, it just amplifies and gets the mind racing. It creates more meaning. Now you know there's another story to this with the key, bula helping and why etc. Great stuff. To keep a long story short. This is really really good. I love the shot of Bula behind Nina in page 6. She just looks awesome with how she's standing and of course the cock. That's always a +. Great work and look forward to what you do next. Have a grand and safe weekend <3

slop_art
>>62504578

Thanks a bunch for being there during the streams! You're a massive help and I love the company. The only thing I need to work on a little bit is more.. characterisation. More dialogue which shows their personality you know. This set didn't allow for a lot of it, but the next narrative set might be a better fit to show their personality. Again, appreciate you a lot!

throwawaydox

i'm only seeing the one attachment with the story

slop_art
>>62625374

Thanks for letting me know, I've uploaded the images in two separate zip files. They were too big to be uploaded in one, therefore the images weren't uploaded correctly.

Jack Pinder

Many thanks. Very, very impressed. Great story, those deep feelings sneak through.

Anonymous

Love your works and characters, especially Nina, my favorite

Anonymous

The writing is top notch SloP, please do invest on it! Amazing storytelling, FAR above what's considered good by porn standards. Do know that

slop_art
>>63358998

Thanks a lot! Still working on improving it behind the scenes and learning writing tricks.