Public Favour (Test) - Page One: (Patreon)

Hi guys,

Sooooooo... I'm trying something new. I'm not 100% on whether it's a good idea or not yet and there's still plenty to learn here, but I thought what better way to get some feedback than to post here.

This essentially is the first page in an animated (not much) corruption sequence. 

I personally don't think it's a bad start for my first attempt. I'll let you guys be the judge though. I'll put a Poll up shortly.

Thanks guys!