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VENOMESS #2 - Discussion thread (spoilers allowed) (Patreon)

Published:
2017-12-18 03:13:16
Imported:
2021-10

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Feel free to express your thoughts regarding VENOMESS #2 in the comments below.

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Spooney Bard

This is a tough one to review, as it's co-written by a fellow supporter it feels a bit personal. Sometimes it can be a bit challenging even to ascribe true authorship of the script in this case as well. Anyway on to the positives. Does Kall ever sleep, because damn that's a lot of comics in six months. I really dig the positions of costume peeled Gwen and the tongue action was a supernova for me. Alves does sourpuss MJ great at the start, and juxtaposes afraid MJ with conqueror Gwen with precision. The first page of Gwen turning her attentions was everything this reader hoped for come true. However... The story really didn't work. Half the pages were recommitted to Gwenom/Peter despite Venomess already nailing this pairing and fetish. Yes the cuckold aspect was there and there was some hot bravado but this sorta fell flat for me. Its the patron's fetish obviously but there was great issue of this already, maybe tentacles could've worked MJ during the scene (there was only one tentacle putting in work in general). I hate to say it, but Felicia's Banginjet declaration is true, there is no such thing as dc. MJ turning around so quickly (I wasn't a big fan of her turn in Gwenom as well) takes away the intensity and the story turns her into a weaker character. Given the circumstances her feelings betray internal logic, makes Gwen's bile neutral, and makes the whole thing drier. The taunt about scary monsters and the meta-textual readings (of the reader becoming a Pete insert as well) added are in vain when the scene plays out with no venom (hehe). I say that when the art itself is absolutely a panoply of pure erotic fury without this poorly added twist. Obviously I didn't hate this issue, but I was thinking it was a certain top ten issue and even felt there was a spot opening for number one. Now I must say it was number 2 of this month even if it was also the best since the September issues.

Just another Monday

Evil rez'd Gwenom returning to pleasure rape Peter was very steamy. Then double jizzing in MJ was great fap fodder. Cuckhold is very hot so THX on that, it's a juicy subject to see more of w/ Gwenom screwing MJ into pleasure madness. I can totally see a #3 after this maybe a year or two from now. A possible preggers Venom harem sounds like great boner fuel & totally worth the potential return value; maybe having this go as a trilogy with R-Ex or SXG as the artist for the 3rd book. I get MJ getting so turned on quickly is a weaker character, but I was rather turned on with it, so boner achievement unlocked. 8/10. Great faps, good art, and satisfied climax w/ a "The End!?" insinuating a sequel (which I sort of would like)

Anonymous

I have noticed that you did something similar in one of the comics you made about Jessica getting pregnant by Peter, are you perhaps experimenting with a new fetish to see if you like it? Other than that, I do feel MJ turned to quickly, maybe a biy more resistance next time on her hand and Gwenom enjoying her misery and struggle?

Shendude

This is incredibly hot. Ridiculous, but hot.

Anonymous
>>8965900

Super implied in that comic, I believe the one about A-Team, where during the threesome between Peter, Carol, and Jess. When Peter came inside Jess' ass, Carol put her tongue in Jess' ass and put some sperm in Jess' vagina.

Just another Monday

Who here wants a 3rd book to make a trilogy for this?

Anonymous

For some reason I found this comic to be absolutely hilarious. The whole thing was just so... ridiculous. Not sure if that was the intent, but I am satisfied with the product.

Hentai Borg

I am not a fan of the cuckhold fetish so i can't give you a good feedback here. This was an average book for me. The art is competently done, special mention to the part with venom tongue ripping MJ panties. The sex scene would have been better with some tentacle instead of futa and i kind of feel the symbiot was a bit unused. I don't think the issue is bad, i am not just the target. Still, i don't regret supporting the 2 books like others months.